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Dancers In Blue

Delicate angels in blue chiffon With elongated necks, wishful as a swan Laced up toes of silky pearl Gathering together for a whirl All eyes on the ballerinas in motion Purely, vividly perfumed in a potion With long bound brunette hair Poised with ivory skin so fair Spiral threads in a timberland of aquamarine In a fluent, feminine picturesque scene Inspired by Brain’s contest (picture poems) Edgar Degas (1834-1917) http://www.abcgallery.com/D/degas/degas84.html

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Raul Moreno

Date: 4/11/2009 5:13:00 PM

Congrats in your placements Laura, hope you have a blessed Easter...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/11/2009 9:53:00 AM

Nicely done, congrats on your win. I've always loved this paining. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/11/2009 8:27:00 AM

Can see this lovely painting by your wonderful words! Congratulations, Laura for this softly written poem and being among the winners! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/11/2009 8:11:00 AM

Love reading this awesome poem again and being reminded of the beauty of the painting you captured so well. Warmest congrats Laura on a well deserved win! If we don't hear anything by Monday, I think I might do a blog asking where they are, and if anyone else is having problems. Still, should you decide to go ahead Laura, I am all for it. I feel really guilty that you are waiting, no matter why it happened. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo

Robin L. Gass

Date: 4/11/2009 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brians contest, Laura! This is lovely. Such excellent magery and the flow and rhyming is perfect! Love, Robin

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/11/2009 5:39:00 AM

Laura congratulations on placing in Brian's contest - God Bless, MJ

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/11/2009 3:05:00 AM

I have always loved Degas Ballerinas. This poem is sweet like those beautiful dancers. I love the rhyming, too. To me, it has the feel of discipline and order, which are definitely a necessary characteristic of every ballet dancer. Congratulations on your success in Brian Strands Picture Poem contest. PS It also brought back fond memories of my daughters dance recitals.

Brian Strand

Date: 4/11/2009 1:34:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Laura my next contest FANFARE is now open.Rgds Brian

Judith Angell Meyer

Date: 4/7/2009 9:24:00 AM

Very nice poem ... and I like that piece by Degas. Vibrant. And I want to thank you too, Laura, for taking the time to comment on my "Summer" poem. It is very much appreciated. ~J~

Date: 4/6/2009 3:09:00 PM

The interesting imagery carries your thoughts in a creative way in this poem. What an uplifting piece. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Karen

John Rhinem

Date: 3/17/2009 10:46:00 AM

Smile~Beautiful write dear Luara! So soft and colorful the imagery! And it flowed so very well my dear friend! Enchanting and fairytalistic is how you painted it dear! The artist would be very pleased with your rendition within the art of your written words I believe! You should do well within the contest with this wonderful write dear lady! Let's go view another one of your fabulous writes! Love To You and Yours, john!:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/17/2009 8:44:00 AM

My little grandaughter loves ballet, and has one of his pictures in her bedroom...it makes me smile, as does your poem. ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/17/2009 5:26:00 AM

Laura you do tremendous justice with this wonderful write to the gorgeous painting. You picked a beauty indeed. Well done and good luck! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 3/17/2009 2:43:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Laura.Rgds Brian

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 3/17/2009 2:37:00 AM

I love that painting, and know it well. you have done a wonderful job of it here. love, Kristin

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/16/2009 10:04:00 PM

Wonderful description of a beautiful painting. You really give the painting life and movement through your words making the dancers leap from the page. Great luck to you in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/16/2009 7:38:00 PM

Dear Laura, Very Beautiful POEM A Kodak moment I can read this picture Good Luck in the Contest YOURS ALWAYS...HG