Dance, Written All Over Me

Graceful on my feet just as a pencil marking me.

Mistakes scattered here and there,
erased only through work and care.
Being myself drives me nearly insane,
never close enough to perfect for my ever-judging brain.
All through my journey that I know will crumble,
shattered by the words and judgments of those who mumble.
I simply want only to smile again.

You ask why I dance,
I ask why you breathe,
You simply cannot see
that dance is more than a part of me.
I did not become
who you assumed I would be,
Dance has simply become
the meaning of me.

I am a dancer, this is my dream,
I need only an answer, though not what it may seem.
I am labelled by the cruel words people speak,
no better than words meant for others who still remain weak.
To be perfect in this world I must forever try- 
erase, change, edit, but never cry.
Yet still, forever through the pain,
I can escape the confines of my overworked brain.
Tomorrow is achieved through what I do today,
I continue to write my own future each and every day.

You ask why I dance,
yet the answer is clear to see.
Because simply, without dance,
I am no longer free.
Beginning, middle, and end,
Dance shows the true me,
At last, alive once again without the pretend.

Blind before but now at once I see,
someone has taken a pen,
and written dance all over me.
My life now has meaning,
for on and within,
it is written plain and clear
That dance lives inside me.

You ask why I dance,
Just listen to me,

Graceful as a pencil, writing all over me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/6/2016 1:50:00 AM
Coming back to you with congratulations.
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Date: 11/27/2016 8:56:00 AM
Beautifully crafted elements of expression with dancing words that become/are not only facets of you, but a facet of NOW. Even if it appears that "tomorrow is what you achieved" through what you do today, I see this as intelligent insight on the importance and recognition in finding the power of each breath in each moment of grace. In other words, the question, Why does one breathe? The title is GOLD. Congrats on the contest. Great poem. -- Wesley C.
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Date: 11/22/2016 2:01:00 PM
my passion as well.. dance on and big congrats, christine..huggs
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Date: 11/21/2016 12:48:00 PM
I used to dance, just like you... Congratulations on your placement with your dance poe, too :)
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Date: 11/19/2016 7:38:00 AM
This is a great poem 7, Louis.
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