Dance With Me

Writing is dancing with words...
     a titillating tango with verbs delicious...
          a sultry waltz with rhythm and meter...
               a hot rumba with randy adjectives...
                    a forbidden dance with unnamed nouns...
                         if this has not left you wanting more
                         then I shall dance with words no more.

Poetry is a pure passion play
     of alliteration and words dancing in line,
           a quick-stepping, twin-tapping salsa,
		a seductive rhapsody in rhyme,
		     moving metaphors, measure and time…
			   my love is wrapped in this poetry
			   so will you please come dance with me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/1/2019 7:36:00 AM
A kindred spirit I have found. Love all your poems. Especially like your form in this and Mountains. We address similar issues (e.g. Crematorium), light and darkness. High Regards, Mel
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Phil Capitano
Date: 2/1/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Mel, always glad to find a brother from a different mother. Welcome to the soup and I look forward to reading more of your work. Have a great day.
Date: 12/11/2017 8:28:00 AM
Hello Phil,this poem has a lot of rhythm I can feel the beat to the music. Lets dance. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/12/2017 8:10:00 AM
Reading this one, after seeing your comments on your "What Poetry Means to me" entry. Wow! A great rhythm combined with some lovely alliteration, which truly conveys your emotional connection! Truly epic and going onto my faves!! Regards, John.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/13/2017 3:52:00 PM
So glad you liked it. Thanks. Namaste.
Date: 3/28/2017 5:48:00 PM
I used to be a Baptist only because I was a sloppy dancer! This poem is a masterpiece! Wow ... and I liked the one before (but didn't comment & this DANCE poem whisked me off my beat). shalom
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Date: 3/27/2017 4:21:00 AM
Life is a rhapsody of thought you write with a mind twisting rhythm sounds good
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Date: 10/29/2016 9:52:00 PM
To dance is to set your soul free, come cha cha with me......loved it....Seren
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Date: 10/16/2016 1:03:00 PM
very romantic Phil...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Phil Capitano
Date: 10/16/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks luloo, this poem has evolved from a two-line ditty to the seven lines that first appeared on this site to the now 14 lines you see here. Writing, if nothing else, is fluid.
Date: 8/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful write - that did want you wanting more - the poem really was dancing - lovely . . . : )
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Date: 7/26/2016 3:43:00 PM
Wow, spicy ...enjoyed. skat
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Date: 7/12/2016 10:00:00 AM
Just great Phil, you really have a gift, are becoming one of my favourite poets! A7
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