Dance Until the End

Whether rock-and-rolling or hip-hopping,
you move and groove so easily at first
when dreams are fresh. Oh, there is no stopping
that dance of youth when all is unrehearsed.
By the middle years, perhaps you’re spinning
(cavorting softer if your kids are sleeping).
Can you slow down if life is about winning?
Might you still be twirling as you’re weeping?
With tears of sometimes joy and sometimes grief,
it’s not too long before you’re dancing to
the Golden Oldies (turned that “final” leaf).
Be positive! Choose well the dance you do.
May you be blessed with grandkids and hand-clapping.
Pace yourself and keep those toes a-tapping!

July 11, 2021For The Last Dance Poetry Contest (NA)
Submitted Aug. 10, 2021 for  'A Brian Strand 1 to 14 line' Poetry Contestst
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Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations! Beautiful, Andrea! Love ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Beautiful Sonnet. Congratulations on your Win!
May Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 6:59 AM
Such good advice with this wonderful write Andrea...
Watt Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Beautiful musings on the varied dimensions of life and the dances we do... "Be positive! Choose well the dance you do" is such wonderful advice. Great sonnet, friend, a fave for me ~ John
Proxenos Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Andrea, this is so cool - our age group can relate to all you write so very creatively. Enjoyed the swing of our time and and 'keep those toes a tapping'! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 6:58 AM
Yes... so true my friend... keep those toes tapping... till the end.. loved it... "choose well the dance you do"... seems a top winner to me... Hugs Ria... Have a lovely day... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 5:45 AM
You’ve said much! I can relate. Seems a winner to me! Pertinent: Might you still be twirling as you’re weeping? With tears of sometimes joy and sometimes grief & turned that “final” leaf.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 4:34 AM
Give me the oldies any time. They are my favourites. Hugs.
Cunningham Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 1:38 AM
Use them or lose them, keep those legs moving. Keep dancing till you drop. Tom
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:35 PM
Lovely poem. Loved these 3 lines ....Can you slow down if life is about winning?..Be positive! Choose well the dance you do.,Pace yourself and keep those toes a-tapping! Thanks for second link. Got some information about deaths due to covid in India. I think I will be able to convince my family. You are a nice soul, so helpful. God bless you dear. A big thanks once again :))
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