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Dance To Her Tune

I do not see bright sunlight anymore, as if the sun was fast fading away. Autumn's charcoal clouds fuel cold rains that pour down, sending the children inside to play. Pretentious colors quickly fade from sight till no traces remain, their beauty brief. And short days relinquish their length to night as trees stand naked, not a single leaf. The honking wild geese have migrated south, along with flocks of colorful songbirds. And daunting rumors, spread by word of mouth, say Winter is coming, in other words. These signs foretell that She will arrive soon, and we'll have to learn to dance to Her tune.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/6/2018 9:58:00 PM
Beautiful, Emile. I hibernate in winter and part of me is looking forward to it.
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Date: 8/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2018 8:15:00 AM
This is truly a great sonnet! I love sonnets and this one is tops in my book. "All the geese have begun migrating south along with most of our precious song birds. And lately...I've been told by word of mouth the same thing's happening to reindeer herds." I especially love these verses and reference to Nature's majesty my friend! A fav and a pleasure to read..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/3/2018 7:29:00 PM
Winter's tune can be harsh, Emile. I was captivated by your first two lines and that second stanza is especially vivid in imagery and powerful in emotion. Superior writing throughout, my friend. Thanks for visiting my page. Hugs, Carolyn
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2018 7:15:00 AM
I would enjoy co-writing with you Carolyn...just pick the subject and let me know when my friend, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/3/2018 7:31:00 PM
I would enjoy co-writing with you sometime, Emile.
Date: 8/3/2018 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Emile- and love the concept of having to dance to Winter's tune...enchanting photo too...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/3/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Aqua, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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