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Dance To Her Tune

The daylight doesn't seem as bright as before, as if the sun is fast fading away. And Autumn's grey clouds fuel rains that pour; sending kids scurrying inside to play. Pretentious colors slowly fade from sight; until no trace remains; their beauty brief. And short days relinquish their length to Night; as trees stand naked, not a single leaf. All the geese have begun migrating south along with most of our precious songbirds. And daunting rumors, spread by word of mouth, whisper Winter's near in so many words. Winter's wailing winds will start whistling soon; and Autumn must learn to dance to their tune.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/6/2018 9:58:00 PM
Beautiful, Emile. I hibernate in winter and part of me is looking forward to it.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/7/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/5/2018 8:15:00 AM
This is truly a great sonnet! I love sonnets and this one is tops in my book. "All the geese have begun migrating south along with most of our precious song birds. And lately...I've been told by word of mouth the same thing's happening to reindeer herds." I especially love these verses and reference to Nature's majesty my friend! A fav and a pleasure to read..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/5/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/3/2018 7:29:00 PM
Winter's tune can be harsh, Emile. I was captivated by your first two lines and that second stanza is especially vivid in imagery and powerful in emotion. Superior writing throughout, my friend. Thanks for visiting my page. Hugs, Carolyn
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2018 7:15:00 AM
I would enjoy co-writing with you Carolyn...just pick the subject and let me know when my friend, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/4/2018 7:14:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/3/2018 7:31:00 PM
I would enjoy co-writing with you sometime, Emile.
Date: 8/3/2018 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, Emile- and love the concept of having to dance to Winter's tune...enchanting photo too...
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/3/2018 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Aqua, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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