Dance Through Dark Days

We danced like this
A fit of madness,  twirling around
round as the beat drowned

  drowned out sounds of outside melodies
unwanted tunes, I danced with you
black dress of luxurious lace swept low
Encasing legs perfectly porcelain
Fanciful footwork-I led you-you led me
 In this symbiotic synchronicity

The light cast down illuminate
  a striking angle of your face
smiling, a twirl, hands in mine
around the floor, intertwined
hands in mine

A room looked on...no notice, no matter
Removed from their critique
 judgement, opinion.......all words of others
They mingled into sounds of nothing
  noise lost in our self-made song
Eyes locked to speak all unsaid
I kissed your pouted lips instead
our steps never un synched.......

We waltzed on as the night made dawn
The floor beneath was then sand
The ceiling now sky...now you and I
The makers of noise, a memory to forget
  Just an inner existence of two

Each day we dance this way
Making song and venue all the same
Taking turns at leading step
For which of us hears the music
Will lead the other in a dance through it.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/10/2009 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Fantastic Free Verse contest! Warm regards, John.
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Date: 3/8/2009 12:19:00 PM
Dear Steve - Great work here! Very haunting and viscerally moving. CONGRATS on your WIN in Christie's contest. Extremely well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/7/2009 1:55:00 PM
Steve I just wanted to congratulate you on placing in Christie's contest, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/6/2009 4:09:00 PM
I love this.. I'm gladfor your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 3/6/2009 12:27:00 PM
Hi Steve... softly and beautifully passionate... great writing my friend... congrats on your win
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Date: 3/6/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Steve on your win in Christie's contest! So extremely well deserved! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/6/2009 7:07:00 AM
You captured such beauty in this one Steve....an outstanding poem...so glad I caught this among the winning poems. Congratulations!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2009 6:08:00 AM
loved the title... the write absolutely matched it well and congrats ~ Arany
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Date: 2/25/2009 3:24:00 AM
Deeply beautiful. I've got chills. Going to read again and soak it all in once more. Love, Shar
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