Dance the Sycamore

Her partisan skin melted
to a grey pale paste
Debauched in glory
and Moaning Lisa when she gave up the ghost
for skin weaved
under the light of a Venus beam
mounted the demon hill and lay a backhand on my throat

The universal untold and unfoldeth
by chance
we are a million miles 
into the dance
A hungry mongrel child
 - Atlas’ apprentice
Dancing Moaning Lisa in silver gown
rolls herself and nowhere to lay my baldy head

She reigns underneath the sycamore
for a speck of dust in her eye lies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Arnone Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Beautifully written -- even if I don't fully understand the meaning. Want to help me out here? :-)
Carter Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 7:33 PM
very good
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August 6, 2016 at 1:34 AM
Niall,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Jennings Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Great to greet you here Niall! Get some more up, embarrass me! Ha. Nice first contribution. I like that "hungry mongrel child". Do keep 'em coming.
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August 4, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Niall C., Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT** ,
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