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Dance of the Night Sky

Dance Of The Night Sky Full luminescent Moon Wears a rainbow crown Of red, orange, yellow, green, and blue Reflecting the dancing stars of wonder In the middle of an ocean gown Of panes gray As the fast moving, Bending white fluffy clouds drown Pass by veiling it for moments Breaking down to spellbind Bright puffs of clouds Conforming to different shapes That drape the night sky © 4/3/2015 Contest Name: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/30/2015 6:43:00 PM

Eve, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~

Julia Ward

Date: 6/29/2015 12:50:00 AM

I hope you don't mind a correction? The last line needs to have the word "drapes" altered to "drape", as it has to take the plural conjugation.

Eve Roper
Date: 6/29/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thank you, Julia, for you help, no it does not hurt my feelings it makes for a better poem. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2015 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations on this most worthy win, Eve! Exquisite and colourful imagery. #7 hugs // paul

Eve Roper
Date: 6/29/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thank you, Paul, you are so kind and very inspiring hugs eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2015 9:39:00 AM

I can see why this is a favorite. Congrats!

Eve Roper
Date: 6/28/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Rick. Hugs Eve

Skat A

Date: 6/28/2015 12:46:00 AM

Eve, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT

Eve Roper
Date: 6/28/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and inspiring compliment. Hugs eve

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2015 4:05:00 AM

love it Eve Congrats on placing hugs

Eve Roper
Date: 6/27/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thank you, Shadow, for your compliment and placing me. Hugs dear friend eve

James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2015 1:34:00 PM

A delight to read this evening Eve, simply lovely, James :) :)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/9/2015 2:03:00 PM

Thank you, James, for the visit and enjoying my poem. Blessings Eve

Vincent Flannery

Date: 4/8/2015 3:57:00 PM

Such an exquisitely written poem that transports the mind to this beautiful view. Great job Eve. Enjoyed very much! Take care.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/8/2015 5:59:00 PM

Thank you, Vincent, for your wonderful inspiring compliment. Blessings dear friend Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2015 6:25:00 PM

this is a very pretty poem, dear. How are you? Hope you had a nice Easter!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 7:37:00 PM

Hello, Andrea, I'm fine thank you for enjoying my poem and hope you're doing well yourself. Easter was fabulous with God's blessings

Tim Smith

Date: 4/7/2015 11:33:00 AM

Havent been commenting much the past few days...this is such pretty picture you painted Eve....hugs Tim

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend, after seeing it on my walk the other night I just had to sit down and write about it

Neva Romaine

Date: 4/7/2015 10:48:00 AM

Hey Eve, stopped by for a visit. This is an amazing tribute to the Night. Filled with wonderful imagery and beautifully expressed. Be Blessed, Neva

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 1:33:00 PM

Neva, thank you for your wonderful inspiring compliment they encourage me to keep writing blessings eve

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/7/2015 8:57:00 AM

Not to be predictable, but this is BREATHTAKING! A 7!!!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 9:44:00 AM

Thank you, Anna, your writing is beautiful also. Enjoyed your writes. Blessings eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/7/2015 8:19:00 AM

Good morning Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 8:25:00 AM

Good morning Richard, I hope you had a wonderful Easter. Blessings dear friend

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2015 2:59:00 PM

Eve, a beautifully written free verse, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Eve Roper
Date: 4/7/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for your 7 and your compliment. Blessings eve

Len Gasun

Date: 4/5/2015 2:19:00 PM

A breathtaking beauty my dear friend Eve! I like it a lot and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2015 9:32:00 PM

Leonora, thank you so very much for the complement. I was watching the night sky the other night and it just fascinated me how fast the clouds were moving, I guess strong winds closer to the heavens. The sky was just beautiful with the full moon with the rainbow color of moisture and the very dark blue and gray like night with a flicker of stars. Blessings and I hope you had a wonderful Easter Sunday

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2015 9:11:00 AM

Beautiful Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2015 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Richard, Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2015 12:04:00 AM

A wonderful poem, Eve! I was just swept away by it's enchanting imagery! Very nicely done!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thank you, Kelly, for you wonderful inspiring compliment it motivates me to write more. Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/4/2015 10:47:00 AM

First of all the title alone is amazing followed by an amazing write!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/5/2015 9:21:00 AM

Maurice, thank you,for you wonderful inspiring compliment my dear friend. Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/3/2015 9:58:00 AM

Lovely

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2015 10:04:00 AM

Thank you, Anna, for stopping by and reading my poem. I do enjoy the visit. Happy Easter to you and your family

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/3/2015 8:04:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your verse this morning! Light & Love

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2015 10:06:00 AM

Thank you, Debbie, for enjoying my poem. Happy Easter to you and your family

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2015 7:31:00 AM

glowing work so well expressed, eve... happy easter and huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2015 10:07:00 AM

Thank you, Nette, for the inspiring compliment. Happy Easter to you and your family

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 4/3/2015 7:26:00 AM

Eve, my friend ..a wonderful morning write as I have my coffee getting ready for the day,have a wonderful day and a blessed Easter,tonytocaa

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2015 10:08:00 AM

Tonytocaa, for stopping by and reading my poem. I do enjoy the visit and your compliment. Happy Easter to you and your family

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2015 5:11:00 AM

- A beautiful poem, dear Eve - A Blessed Easter to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/3/2015 10:09:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-lise, for your compliment. I do enjoy your visits. Happy Easter to you and your family