Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Dance of the Night Sky

Dance Of The Night Sky

                                            Full luminescent Moon
                                           Wears a rainbow crown
                               Of red, orange, yellow, green, and blue
                                Reflecting the dancing stars of wonder
                                     In the middle of an ocean gown
                                                  Of panes gray
                                               As the fast moving,
                                    Bending white fluffy clouds drown
                                      Pass by veiling it for moments
                                        Breaking down to spellbind
                                            Bright puffs of clouds
                                     Conforming to different shapes
                                         That drape the night sky

©  4/3/2015

Contest Name: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A June 30, 2015 at 6:43 PM Eve, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~

Julia Ward June 29, 2015 at 12:50 AM I hope you don't mind a correction? The last line needs to have the word "drapes" altered to "drape", as it has to take the plural conjugation. Eve Roper June 29, 2015 at 7:47 AM Thank you, Julia, for you help, no it does not hurt my feelings it makes for a better poem. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus June 28, 2015 at 5:42 PM Congratulations on this most worthy win, Eve! Exquisite and colourful imagery. #7 hugs // paul Eve Roper June 29, 2015 at 7:48 AM Thank you, Paul, you are so kind and very inspiring hugs eve

Richard Lamoureux June 28, 2015 at 9:39 AM I can see why this is a favorite. Congrats! Eve Roper June 28, 2015 at 4:28 PM Thank you, Rick. Hugs Eve

Skat A June 28, 2015 at 12:46 AM Eve, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT Eve Roper June 28, 2015 at 7:31 AM Thank you so much for your congratulations and inspiring compliment. Hugs eve

Shadow Hamilton June 27, 2015 at 4:05 AM love it Eve Congrats on placing hugs Eve Roper June 27, 2015 at 1:38 PM Thank you, Shadow, for your compliment and placing me. Hugs dear friend eve

James Fraser April 9, 2015 at 1:34 PM A delight to read this evening Eve, simply lovely, James :) :) Eve Roper April 9, 2015 at 2:03 PM Thank you, James, for the visit and enjoying my poem. Blessings Eve

Vincent Flannery April 8, 2015 at 3:57 PM Such an exquisitely written poem that transports the mind to this beautiful view. Great job Eve. Enjoyed very much! Take care. Eve Roper April 8, 2015 at 5:59 PM Thank you, Vincent, for your wonderful inspiring compliment. Blessings dear friend Eve

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2015 at 6:25 PM this is a very pretty poem, dear. How are you? Hope you had a nice Easter! Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 7:37 PM Hello, Andrea, I'm fine thank you for enjoying my poem and hope you're doing well yourself. Easter was fabulous with God's blessings

Tim Smith April 7, 2015 at 11:33 AM Havent been commenting much the past few days...this is such pretty picture you painted Eve....hugs Tim Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 1:31 PM Thank you, dear friend, after seeing it on my walk the other night I just had to sit down and write about it

Neva Romaine April 7, 2015 at 10:48 AM Hey Eve, stopped by for a visit. This is an amazing tribute to the Night. Filled with wonderful imagery and beautifully expressed. Be Blessed, Neva Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 1:33 PM Neva, thank you for your wonderful inspiring compliment they encourage me to keep writing blessings eve

Anna Hopper April 7, 2015 at 8:57 AM Not to be predictable, but this is BREATHTAKING! A 7!!! Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 9:44 AM Thank you, Anna, your writing is beautiful also. Enjoyed your writes. Blessings eve

Richard Lamoureux April 7, 2015 at 8:19 AM Good morning Eve. Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 8:25 AM Good morning Richard, I hope you had a wonderful Easter. Blessings dear friend

Constance La France April 6, 2015 at 2:59 PM Eve, a beautifully written free verse, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry Eve Roper April 7, 2015 at 8:26 AM Thank you so much for your 7 and your compliment. Blessings eve

Len Gasun April 5, 2015 at 2:19 PM A breathtaking beauty my dear friend Eve! I like it a lot and I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 9:32 PM Leonora, thank you so very much for the complement. I was watching the night sky the other night and it just fascinated me how fast the clouds were moving, I guess strong winds closer to the heavens. The sky was just beautiful with the full moon with the rainbow color of moisture and the very dark blue and gray like night with a flicker of stars. Blessings and I hope you had a wonderful Easter Sunday

Richard Lamoureux April 5, 2015 at 9:11 AM Beautiful Eve! Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Richard, Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Kelly Deschler April 5, 2015 at 12:04 AM A wonderful poem, Eve! I was just swept away by it's enchanting imagery! Very nicely done! Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 9:20 AM Thank you, Kelly, for you wonderful inspiring compliment it motivates me to write more. Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Maurice Yvonne April 4, 2015 at 10:47 AM First of all the title alone is amazing followed by an amazing write! Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 9:21 AM Maurice, thank you,for you wonderful inspiring compliment my dear friend. Have a wonderful Easter my friend

Anna Hopper April 3, 2015 at 9:58 AM Lovely Eve Roper April 3, 2015 at 10:04 AM Thank you, Anna, for stopping by and reading my poem. I do enjoy the visit. Happy Easter to you and your family

Debbie Guzzi April 3, 2015 at 8:04 AM I enjoyed reading your verse this morning! Light & Love Eve Roper April 3, 2015 at 10:06 AM Thank you, Debbie, for enjoying my poem. Happy Easter to you and your family

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2015 at 7:31 AM glowing work so well expressed, eve... happy easter and huggs Eve Roper April 3, 2015 at 10:07 AM Thank you, Nette, for the inspiring compliment. Happy Easter to you and your family

Tonytocaa Camacho April 3, 2015 at 7:26 AM Eve, my friend ..a wonderful morning write as I have my coffee getting ready for the day,have a wonderful day and a blessed Easter,tonytocaa Eve Roper April 3, 2015 at 10:08 AM Tonytocaa, for stopping by and reading my poem. I do enjoy the visit and your compliment. Happy Easter to you and your family

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2015 at 5:11 AM - A beautiful poem, dear Eve - A Blessed Easter to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper April 3, 2015 at 10:09 AM Thank you, Anne-lise, for your compliment. I do enjoy your visits. Happy Easter to you and your family