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Dance of the Clock

Tick-tock, tick-tock, the dance of the clock’s invisible to the naked eye; occulted. We see what we do with spirit’s eye; it sees beyond walls. When my clock dances a jig, the physical eye, uninvited to the party, sleeps deep.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/28/2019 8:56:00 AM
Just love the mystery behind and surrounding this one. A FAVE. ~ gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/29/2019 11:50:00 AM
Wow, thanks so much!
Date: 4/28/2019 7:57:00 AM
The cadence of this poem reminds me of the ticking and tocking.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/29/2019 11:50:00 AM
S'posed to...thanks.
Date: 4/27/2019 7:14:00 AM
That tick-tock is a company of sorts..doing its dance as we fall asleep.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/27/2019 6:03:00 PM
My Mom used to put a clock by our cribs when we were very tiny; it would calm us and we could sleep. Thanks.
Date: 4/27/2019 4:53:00 AM
Profound and poetic verse dearest, MLK!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/27/2019 6:03:00 PM
Thank you, Demetrios.
Date: 4/27/2019 2:43:00 AM
Hello dear poet, good poetry I found here ... Imagine only if we saw things more with the inner vision, how many beautiful things would we see ...
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/27/2019 6:04:00 PM
Yes, thanks.
Date: 4/26/2019 8:28:00 PM
An interesting write not easy to decipher yet keeps me pondering.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/27/2019 6:04:00 PM
Dreams, my friend, dreams...thanks.

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