Notes About The Poem

My poem navigates themes of severe hardships, resilience, introspection, and growth. The exploration of contrasts and complexities within the verses are life challenges building up and illustrating the transformative power of personal experiences.

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Dance of Shadows and Storms

Without a shadow's kiss
           How blooms a hidden rose?
Without a storm's embrace 
          How does an oak repose?

In Twilight's waltz, secrets unroll
    the mystery it bestows.
Yet in its gently budding leaves 
     tales of resilience compose.

How should I yearn to climb 
          I lack the precipice's call?
Cragged visions of distant peaks and 
   fallow mind 
          a darkened silent beckon enthrall.

Oh, to forge within, 
          Oh, why, doubt cloaks my inner child.
In solitude's chains
          I hear the introspective thrall.

Yet, tremors are in my soul 
          and yet a lonely seed begins to climb
A combination of growth 
          harmonizing with each chime.
Nourished by tears that sow 
          the fertile sands of time.
My garden of emotions still hints 
     at a poet’s 
          paradisiacal paradigm.

Suddenly, a sunlit coast where dreams
       unfurl in storms
A canvas painted by aspirations 
          that gently adorn.
With hopeful brushstrokes 
               life-captivating stories that plume.
A gallery of memories 
                    a child’s kaleidoscope.
 Once upon a solitary, 
                           darkened 
                                 locked room.

Perhaps a gardener’s gentle hand 
     can stir the fallow ground
Fertilizing roots to depths 
           where true potential 
                    once lost - begged to be found.

A dawn’s soft breath a gentle lure 
       perhaps to coax my dormant leaves unbound
Awakening possibilities in the quiet 
                    yet, now fertile ground.

In stillness my thoughts emerge 
         unseen, a quiet vow,
An introspective voyage 
                      on the sea of here and now.
My diamonds form from tears 
                          not battles' echoing crown

I am a jewel of resilience 
                                            forged in the soul's darkest hour.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Herrick Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Another Masterpiece, Daniel. This was heartfully robust and true with kaleidoscopic and viewmaster view. When God has put you threw the forge, he has chosen you to fulfill in his designs. In a refiners fire. Like this poem.
Rodgers Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Hey Jude, wow, thanks for such a powerful response to the poem! "Kaleidoscopic viewmaster" - that's pure gold! Your words about the refiner's fire really made me smile. Feeling grateful for your insights and the encouragement. Means a lot, to me. Blessings, Daniel
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February 2, 2024 at 11:16 PM
Continued ... Thank God for the near-death experiences of my life and the strength and will he gives to me to overcome the deceiver. With God, all things are possible. Woe is me without the guidance of his spirit within. This goes on my FAV list. Bill (See below)
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:10 AM
Dear Bill, Thank you deeply for your heartfelt response to my poem. I'm honored that my words clicked with you and captured the essence of your journey. Your faith and resilience shine through your words, and I'm grateful for your openness in sharing your experiences. Indeed, with God, all things are possible. Your presence on my FAV list is a true honor. May you continue to find strength and guidance in the spirit within. - Blessings, Daniel
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February 2, 2024 at 11:15 PM
Inspiring poetry, Daniel. The essence of our being is revealed through the will to overcome the trials we face in life and the gratitude and praise we offer to our Creator for the many blessings we receive. Your last line resonates and illustrates the life I've lived these past 79 years. "I am a jewel of resilience, forged in the soul's darkest hour." Have a blessed weekend, my friend. Bill
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February 1, 2024 at 6:45 AM
Exceptional writing. Just love this. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
Rodgers Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Dear Regina, Thank you for stopping by with such kind words and May God Bless You! - Daniel
Empress Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Back to congratulate you on your well deserved win dear daniel. You deserve all the accolades,
Rodgers Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 2:26 PM
Good evening, thank you my dear friend and congrats on your well deserved win. It was a a great poem and you should be proud. - Blessings, Daniel
Scott Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 4:16 AM
I also congratulate you on a placement in Gina's contest. You really win me over with this imagery, I am not a gardener but the metaphor is strong and captivating. I must investigate more of your poetry! Great job Daniel (fav)
Rodgers Avatar
January 28, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Hello Sam, great meeting you and thanks for your kind comments and congrats. My wife is the master gardener but I did grow up on a farm. Have a blessed week! - Daniel
M  Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 2:20 AM
WOW Daniel …..brilliant poem with much to ponder by a brilliant poet with great depth and understanding! Debx
Rodgers Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Good Morning, Deb! you are the sweetest and I am so grateful for your words of affirmation. I always look forward to reading your poems and being filled with great poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
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January 25, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Creative work. A different kind of presentation. We all have a story to tell and each one different but valuable story. You sharing your story with us in poetic form was enlightening. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara K
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January 26, 2024 at 5:17 AM
Good Morning, Sara, thank you for your wonderful kind words. Yes, we all have a story in us that makes us so unique and interesting. That is why I love reading poems from the heart of amazing poets like you. I am glad that we are on the same journey of writing and sharing. - Blessings, my Friend! - Daniel
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January 25, 2024 at 5:38 AM
Wow! This poem is brilliant. You are a talented writer. I can feel this and it brought up a lot of things in mind from my life. It hooked me with the very first line ...without a shadow's kiss. This poem is. Fave for me. :)
Rodgers Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:01 AM
Good Morning, Heidi, You are so kind, affirmative and validating. Writing poetry is so healing and expressive, and as a fellow poet, we can feel that in each other's words. Blessings, Daniel
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January 22, 2024 at 7:02 PM
I can relate to this, especially the healing of poetry "paradisiacal paradigm" and the end about crown not formed by battling but by tears. Your resilience. Beautiful writing
Rodgers Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:58 AM
Good Morning, Paige. Thank you so much for your beautiful comments and, yes, the power of the tear. - Blessings, Daniel
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January 21, 2024 at 8:42 AM
The vivid descriptions in this expressive poem resonate with me. I especially love " . . . dreams unfurl in storms" and " . . . to coax my dormant leaves unbound." They convey an uplifting message about the resilience of humanity. Janice
Rodgers Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 9:33 AM
Dear Janice, your appreciation for the vivid descriptions in my poem warms my heart. Your highlighting of phrases like "dreams unfurl in storms" and "to coax my dormant leaves unbound" captures the essence beautifully. Thank you for recognizing the uplifting message of humanity's resilience. - Blessings, Daniel
Herrick Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 3:15 PM
Very poetic and deep, soft and hard. Naked lunch of the maelstrom of emotions. Rainbows end meets crystallized resolve of new life, from a cocoon of wisdom.
Rodgers Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 9:35 AM
Dear Jude, your thoughtful comments on my poem mean a lot. I appreciate your description of it as "very poetic and deep, soft and hard." Your imagery of a naked lunch within the maelstrom of emotions, the convergence of rainbows end, and the crystallized resolve emerging from a cocoon of wisdom is very insightful. Thank you for your insights. Gratefully, Daniel
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January 20, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Do you know of the quote by Freud? “Everywhere I go I find a poet has been there before me." You have so much to offer. It's wonderful that your words will help me and others think about how we can help ourselves have a pleasant life. I joke that we're always told to be the best we can be....but I think if we're good, that might be enough. Too much pressure otherwise. I was thinking I haven't spoken to my daughter in a while, and your poem reminded me to reach out. TY
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February 6, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Daniel, I am not a therapist, but have known many throughout my life. There are many different styles and we just have to find that which works for us. That is not always easy for someone in need of help. I know the people you see are lucky to have you to talk to.
Rodgers Avatar
January 20, 2024 at 2:35 PM
Duke, your mention of Freud's quote deeply resonates. I am a therapist by trade. Are you? Your kind words about my contributions and their impact on personal reflection mean a lot. I'm glad my words serve as a reminder to connect with loved ones. Your perspective on being good rather than constantly striving for the best is refreshing—a reminder to embrace authenticity. Thank you for your thoughtful insights. Blessings, Daniel
Hawkins Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 3:47 PM
Wow! Daniel, you are an excellent poet. I found this poem fascinating to read. I write simple poems. We would not appreciate beauty so much if there was no ugliness as a comparison. Take care. Shirley
Rodgers Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 4:05 PM
Thanks so much, Shirley, I am glad you liked my poem. I really appreciate your poems for all poems are from the heart and that is what makes them unique and special. We are all apart of the poetry family. I think sometimes that I have a tendency to get too complex. Many Blessings, Daniel
Pandit Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 5:23 AM
A brilliant display of your poetic prowess, Daniel. Highly emotive write captures the readers' attention to the end. Inspiring thoughts and perspective. An excellent write.
Rodgers Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Hello Vijay, I so much appreciate your wonderful comments and am happy that you enjoyed it. - Blessings, Daniel
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January 19, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Gorgeous writing, Daniel. I liked how some verses had different lengths.
Rodgers Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Hello Andrea, Thank you so much for visiting my poem and the affirmations you gave. Have a great weekend! - Blessings, Daniel
Messina Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:38 AM
This is a brilliant write, Daniel. So deep and clever, my friend. Very creative! Wishing you well...Charlie
Rodgers Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Hello Charles, thanks for taking the time to read and send a note. It is so much appreciated. I look forward to reading more of your poems. - Blessings, Daniel!
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:14 AM
Dear Daniel, i read your opening lines and it left me breathless, just wow! And the way you’ve written this is so beautiful! And so creative. So many lines resonate with me and i think many can too, how sometime our inner child still gets triggered and tears they nourish and sands of time and how you’ve used the concept of gardening here to depict life and phases etc is so very clever and creative truly! Everytime i read you i feel like its one of the best iv read from you but then i read again
Rodgers Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:38 AM
Dear Ink Empress, Your words wrap around my heart like a warm embrace, filling me with gratitude and joy. Knowing that my words have left you breathless and resonated with you is a gift beyond measure. Your recognition of the gardening metaphor is deeply cherished. Life, with all its phases and seasons, is indeed a garden we tend to. Your encouragement fuels my creativity. Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts; it means the world to me. - Blessings, Daniel
Empress Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:16 AM
And im like wow! Impressive and impeccable! really! I love also the last lines there and also “Nourished by tears that sow the fertile sands of time, My garden of emotions hints, at a poet’s paradisiacal paradigm.” The light alliterations word pairings and way of expressing is beyond profound! Another fave this is for me: and if it is for a contest. BOL!
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January 16, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Poem says to me that we are stronger than we think we are. I love this message. Beautiful rhyme with terrific imagery, creates deep thoughts and mesmerizing story.
Rodgers Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 2:44 AM
Good morning, Hilda, thank you for your wonderful compliments. Yes, we are stronger than we think or give ourselves credit for and we can flourish given the motivation. - Blessings, Daniel!
One Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 11:52 AM
You my friend and are one hell of a poet.. a wordsmith of deep and profound poetry.. Do you have a book? I love that last line, arnt we all diamonds? Adversity is a funny thing, is it not? Some become stronger, some fall apart.. Childhood is a playground where our adulthood relies on the strong foundations, you know they say its easier to build a strong child than to fix a broken adult... In awe of your poem, and many will relate to your words ...
Rodgers Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Dear Silent One, Your generous praise warms my poet's heart. I'm touched by your kind words and the depth with which you engaged with my work. The idea that we are all diamonds, shaped by adversity, resonates deeply. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and the glimpse into your poetic world as the "poetic gardener." Your encouragement means a lot. Knowing that I am going to read some of your garden poems. Gratefully, Daniel
One Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 11:54 AM
I have a lot of poems about gardeners and gardens... Im also known as the poetic gardener is some poetic circles..
Lane Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 11:06 AM
I read this twice and hardly know where to begin expressing my thoughts. Those who've felt hurt, physical and/or emotional, long for some glimmer of hope. Whether the kiss from a shadow, or having survived a storm, it builds character and resilience to tremors in a soul and wounds in a heart. "Diamonds from tears..." Each one fought for in a battle you didn't begin, but one in which you overcame defeat. Awesome lines, Daniel.
Rodgers Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 6:01 PM
Dear Lin, Your thoughtful comments on my poem touched my heart deeply. I appreciate the way you articulated the essence of the piece, acknowledging the struggle and resilience portrayed within the verses. Your insights brought an added layer of meaning to my words, and I'm grateful for your kind words. Thank you for taking the time to reflect on my work. Blessings, Daniel Daniel
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