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Dance of Desire

He tangoed into my life,
black eyes flash-bang exploding,
proffering his red-rose lips,
sparking fiery lust.

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Anisha Dutta

March 8, 2024 at 6:33 AM

Wow ! I love most, the Second line

Linda Alice Fowler

March 8, 2024 at 8:26 AM

Hi Anisha. Many thanks for the wow ;) Good to see you. I hope all is well. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2024 at 2:41 AM

- Lovely and sparking, Linda :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

March 8, 2024 at 8:24 AM

Anne-Lise. Good evening! Thanks for the visit dear! :)

Hilda Greenhough

March 7, 2024 at 4:34 PM

Poem of fast moving romance. It piqued my interest.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 8, 2024 at 8:22 AM

Hi Hilda. Nice to see you here! Many thanks for the read. I am pleased your interest was piqued. :)

Mystic Rose Rose

March 6, 2024 at 3:01 PM

very lusty lines, beautiful

Linda Alice Fowler

March 7, 2024 at 6:18 AM

Dear Vie, I am so pleased by your visit! Thank you dear one. Alice :)

Peter Dome

March 6, 2024 at 2:02 PM

Wow. This is so clever. Love the wording and content. Pete.well done.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 7, 2024 at 6:18 AM

Thank you Pete. Nice to see you here! :)

Andrea Dietrich

March 6, 2024 at 1:06 PM

WELL done. I think if this is for that one contest, she will really like it. maybe not for the contest. I don't see dodo next to it.

Linda Alice Fowler

March 7, 2024 at 6:17 AM

Thanks Andrea. I wrote this for the contest and I, too, thought she'd like it. However, when re-reading the description before final posting, I noted she asked for "nonsensical words" and "a little humor", so sadly, I did not enter it. Many thanks for reading!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 6, 2024 at 11:25 AM

Dear Linda, Your poem is a wonderful passionate portrayal of desire ignited by a fiery encounter. In just a few words, you vividly capture the intensity and allure of attraction, creating a mesmerizing picture of the dance between two souls consumed by passion. Your imagery is striking and evocative, leaving a lasting impression on the reader's mind. This portrayal is a tantalizing glimpse into the realm of desire and longing. - Blessings, Daniel

Linda Alice Fowler

March 7, 2024 at 6:14 AM

Your eloquent comments are warmly appreciated Daniel. Thank you for reviewing and commenting. blessings and hugs, Linda :)