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Dance In the Wind

You let the air out of my balloon Before it could dance in the wind. But a storm is brewing inside of me and I'm inflating myself again.

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2017 10:55:00 AM

Don't let a tiny prick deflate your confidence Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/5/2017 2:19:00 PM

Very wise and spiritually concise poem, Lin. It is good to read your thoughts again. They are much appreciated here at the Soup. Guess that's why there are 99 Luftballoons. Lovely inspiring poetry, dear. Love and smiles to you.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/4/2017 3:06:00 PM

I do that about every day, with me it's a dietary issue, love it Lin...

Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:01:00 AM

Lol Charlie...tmi!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/4/2017 10:37:00 AM

I like this one, Lin:) deep meaning behind simple four lines:)

Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:00:00 AM

Thanks sweet friend.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/3/2017 11:41:00 PM

Good one!!! I like this...Don't let anyone every let the air out of your balloon, dear. Hugs and thanks for visiting my latest. Blessings

Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:00:00 AM

Thanks, Eileen. My balloon has a thick skin by now. Good to see you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2017 8:16:00 PM

I really like this clever one, LIn. By the way, hurry and take down its duplicate that got posted above it before someone comments there.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 10:57:00 AM

Thanks for the Great compliment, Andrea.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2017 11:11:00 AM

wow .. well done ~*

Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thank you, dear Eve.

Tim Smith

Date: 4/2/2017 8:36:00 AM

Blow that confidence back up.. Lovely Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 10:20:00 AM

Thank you, dear Tim. My confidence will not be thwarted. I love my phone...wink!