Dance In the Wind

You let the air out of my balloon
Before it could dance in the wind.
But a storm is brewing inside of me 
and I'm inflating myself again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/12/2017 10:55:00 AM
Don't let a tiny prick deflate your confidence Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/5/2017 2:19:00 PM
Very wise and spiritually concise poem, Lin. It is good to read your thoughts again. They are much appreciated here at the Soup. Guess that's why there are 99 Luftballoons. Lovely inspiring poetry, dear. Love and smiles to you.
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Date: 4/4/2017 3:06:00 PM
I do that about every day, with me it's a dietary issue, love it Lin...
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:01:00 AM
Lol Charlie...tmi!
Date: 4/4/2017 10:37:00 AM
I like this one, Lin:) deep meaning behind simple four lines:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thanks sweet friend.
Date: 4/3/2017 11:41:00 PM
Good one!!! I like this...Don't let anyone every let the air out of your balloon, dear. Hugs and thanks for visiting my latest. Blessings
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 11:00:00 AM
Thanks, Eileen. My balloon has a thick skin by now. Good to see you.
Date: 4/3/2017 8:16:00 PM
I really like this clever one, LIn. By the way, hurry and take down its duplicate that got posted above it before someone comments there.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 10:57:00 AM
Thanks for the Great compliment, Andrea.
Date: 4/3/2017 11:11:00 AM
wow .. well done ~*
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, dear Eve.
Date: 4/2/2017 8:36:00 AM
Blow that confidence back up.. Lovely Lin
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Date: 4/3/2017 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, dear Tim. My confidence will not be thwarted. I love my phone...wink!
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