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Dance In the Wind

You let the air out of my balloon
Before it could dance in the wind.
But a storm is brewing inside of me 
and I'm inflating myself again.

Copyright © Lin Lane | Year Posted 2017

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April 12, 2017 at 10:55 AM

Don't let a tiny prick deflate your confidence Lin lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

April 5, 2017 at 2:19 PM

Very wise and spiritually concise poem, Lin. It is good to read your thoughts again. They are much appreciated here at the Soup. Guess that's why there are 99 Luftballoons. Lovely inspiring poetry, dear. Love and smiles to you.

April 4, 2017 at 3:06 PM

I do that about every day, with me it's a dietary issue, love it Lin...

April 5, 2017 at 11:01 AM

Lol Charlie...tmi!

April 4, 2017 at 10:37 AM

I like this one, Lin:) deep meaning behind simple four lines:)

April 5, 2017 at 11:00 AM

Thanks sweet friend.

Eileen Manassian

April 3, 2017 at 11:41 PM

Good one!!! I like this...Don't let anyone every let the air out of your balloon, dear. Hugs and thanks for visiting my latest. Blessings

April 5, 2017 at 11:00 AM

Thanks, Eileen. My balloon has a thick skin by now. Good to see you.

Andrea Dietrich

April 3, 2017 at 8:16 PM

I really like this clever one, LIn. By the way, hurry and take down its duplicate that got posted above it before someone comments there.

April 5, 2017 at 10:57 AM

Thanks for the Great compliment, Andrea.

April 3, 2017 at 11:11 AM

wow .. well done ~*

April 3, 2017 at 12:35 PM

Thank you, dear Eve.

April 2, 2017 at 8:36 AM

Blow that confidence back up.. Lovely Lin

April 3, 2017 at 10:20 AM

Thank you, dear Tim. My confidence will not be thwarted. I love my phone...wink!

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