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Dance In The Rain

She wants to dance in the rain and walk across edges, of warmest sands that shimmers, as if diamonds like, speckled...freckles and she wants to let her hair hang down, loose as if to flow, like strands of silken whispers and she will wear Batiste , translucent with wonderous, glitter, luster for as the day, slips away from daylight, to the dusk all she wants is to dance in the rain and say ' l love you' ' l love you' tribute Whilk & Misky- Rain Dance

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Date: 8/5/2025 5:43:00 AM
This is a happy read - joy in love. I love how the diamonds of rain become speckled freckles (which has such playful sounds - child-like in its joy). J :)
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 8/5/2025 7:45:00 AM
Thank you for such a lovely comment. Jackie.

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