Dance All Day

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a dance of peacocks
a shake of hued tail feathers
when they prance romance

huge hibiscus blooms
home to nearby hummingbirds
lure butterflies, too

at the pink of dawn
a red rooster struts his stuff
towards the soon noon

soft lavender days
in dreaminess of summer
constantly sparkle

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2022 9:12:00 AM

Your "Dance All Day" is a lovely write. Love your peacocks, hibiscus, pink dawn and your lavender days. I want some. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 5/27/2022 10:42:00 AM

Your lovely remarks are the highest compliment, Paula. Thank you so much. Enjoy your weekend, my friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2022 1:17:00 PM

Enjoyed the haiku sequence. Each one has its unique style and beauty. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/28/2022 3:15:00 PM

You have my deepest thanks for your wonderful comment Sara. Evelyn :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/28/2022 10:48:00 AM

WoW! Evelyn, Your string of haikus are beautiful. I loved the photo of the peacock as well. Good job:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/28/2022 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for your thrilling comments, Alexis. I hope you have a wonderful day, Evelyn :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/27/2022 11:17:00 PM

I used to have quite a collection of hibiscus. But mow around me tall buildings were erected and no sunshine could keep the hibiscus alive. A lovely poem. Blessings.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/28/2022 11:14:00 AM

Thank you very much. I have never had any hibiscus, but I would like some. Have a nice day, Evelyn :)