Damaged

Damaged Your eyes are dark and endless Like the pit that they call love. I fell in Hit my head and was blinded By the light in your darkness. I couldn't see the signs That you never gave me. Couldn't hear the screams Telling me that you were no good. And as if they weren't enough To get that through My messed up little brain Somebody else was there Holding your heart In the palm of her hand. She's got mine too In the other hand she crushes it As I speak. No, it's ok I'll just get through a little Damaged.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2015 6:29:00 PM

oh that is deep, S Poet, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/24/2015 2:59:00 PM

Squirrel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT