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She didn’t run – she walked Her hands by her side Graceful and girly, like a lady She was certainly ladylike I was her girl, her baby The twinkle in her eye And the scatterbrained reminder That love is never silent One afternoon As the sun embraced my thoughts And laughter spun joy through my heart There were flowers in the meadow Daisies that had such happy faces And I was drawn to them the way that The moon seems to attract the stars I ran messily toward the flowers Not more than a few steps away from her And I felt my heart giggle with delight When I looked back at her behind me, running Never more beautiful than in that moment As sun poured across her shoulders And I led her into the messiness Of a childlike happiness and grace At a gentle, innocent pace Since that day so long ago - I always imagined Her favorite flower was the daisy A Tender Moment From Childhood Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury June 4, 2021

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Date: 6/7/2021 9:36:00 PM
Indeed, 'live is never silent', especially after daisies' deeply fragrant scent, congrats for the win
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Date: 6/4/2021 9:21:00 PM
Beautiful. I could see two children running madly through thee field of daisies. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/4/2021 3:34:00 PM
So many souls love the daisy, it is such a pretty flower,. I can see how she loved them most, you did a splendid job retelling it. Much love .
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Date: 6/4/2021 2:21:00 PM
A very delightful and uplifting poem that filled my heart with pure joy, my dearest friend, Gina. I loved it. Hugs xxx
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