Daisey's Note

In the darkest of days back in nineteen sixteen,
Daisy worked in a factory where she often saw,
men march to the port embarking for Egypt
to fight for King and Country in a terrible war.

Along with her friends Daisy threw good luck notes,
with their name and address for the soldiers to write,
and Horace, one soldier picked up Daisy’s note,
and to her surprise, his letter arrived.

So from the hundreds of pieces of paper
that littered the road on that march,
Horace and Daisy did not know that day
they had met as he sailed away.

And so their letters travelled both ways.
Now there are photographs close to their hearts.
Daisy met Horace’s family a long time before,
the war was over that kept them apart.

So from the hundreds of pieces of paper
that littered the road on that march,
Horace and Daisy did not know that day
they had met as he sailed away.

On May twenty-first, nineteen seventy-one,
Fifty-five years later there’s a year turning gold,
In Daisy’s sister’s Greensborough home -
There’s a toast from their kin,
thankful for Daisy’s note Horace found to unfold.

So from the hundreds of pieces of paper
that littered the road on that march,
Horace and Daisy did not know that day
they had met as he sailed away -
when Daisy waved her Horace away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Babcock Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 3:58 PM
A wonderful story told in these lyrics a sweet romantic tale. Loved it. love phyl
Laurie Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:41 PM
Hello Phyllis ... I am not really a romantic person, but after hearing this story, I just felt it needed to be saved. I thought it was so full of true romance - one again I thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
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August 4, 2020 at 11:30 AM
You create the sense of longing so well here, Lindsay. It's quite a compelling story of two people who should have been given the chance to have a life together. Great writing! Hugs, Carolyn
Laurie Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Hello Carolyn ... this is the basics of their actual getting together. They are my wife's grandparents, and after hearing their story I just could not help myself. I thought it needed to be preserved - thank you Carolyn - Lindsay
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August 3, 2020 at 1:59 AM
- A beautiful but heartbreaking story that you have written excellent, Lindsay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:41 PM
Hello Anne-Lise ... with heading of to war, there could easily have had a different outcome. I appreciate your comment Anne-Lise - Lindsay
Ball Avatar
July 31, 2020 at 12:35 PM
I think this is one of the sweetest stories I have read. So glad Horace made it back to meet his daisy in person. Great Stuff Lindsay. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:38 PM
Hello Judy ... yes, I felt the same way when I listened to this tale. It was a pleasure to share this love story - thanks Judy - Lindsay
Devonshire Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 10:20 AM
I love these stories of times gone by and do appreciate the happy ending, Lindsay. Daisy picked the right soldier to correspond. Even with the passage of 55 years, their notes still brought them comfort. Very nicely penned, Lindsay! Hugs, Carolyn
Rose  Avatar
July 30, 2020 at 8:27 AM
Such a sad love story, so does serendipity so does love, xo
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:36 PM
Hello Pixie ... a story that could have ended up badly due to the war, but happily a great outcome - thanks Pixie - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 8:53 AM
What a sentimental write, brought tears to my eyes, I am the worlds most hopeless romantic. I loved this poem about Daisy and Horace as my mom and dad were a WW 11 romance as per my trilogy I posted. Blessings Lindsay, Jennifer.
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 6:31 PM
Hello Jennifer ... Wow; I didn't expect tears, but if I read or hear a touching romantic story it's such a feel good time. I admit I had a lump in my throat listening and I just knew a verse must be written - thanks again Jennifer - Lindsay
Cunningham Avatar
July 25, 2020 at 4:00 AM
A lovely tale that ended well, well written Lindsay.
Laurie Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 5:59 PM
Hello Tom ... absolutely true story told to me by my mother-in-law about her parents Horace and Daisy. Thank you Tom for commenting - Lindsay
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