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Preacher of the skies, Sermon of Thy golden rays: Wheat parishioners.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/18/2009 8:54:00 PM
Raul this is a very lovely portrait that you have shared, excellent imagery, tone and flow... It is indeed a pleasure to have read for you. Thank you for sharing and for your Congrats, I truly enjoyed your waterfall contest:-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/16/2009 3:10:00 PM
Like the comparison in this one. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 11:26:00 AM
" sermon of the golden rays". I LIKE THAT! Well done! Worthy of Donne or Blake or to be sung by say, Jim Morrison. Thank you for your kind words. You are always there. Sorry about the lag, but I was moving from New Jersey to North Carolina all last month into this. Just got up and running this week. I'm putting up a Halloween poem for all of you this weekend to kick it off for what promises to be a nationwide Mardi Gras. I'm eager to hear what YOU think! Thank you, as always. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 10/16/2009 8:44:00 AM
Simply beautiful in every way, Raul! Excellnt and highly inspired Haiku! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/15/2009 1:11:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Raul, another gem from you >> James
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Date: 10/15/2009 11:57:00 AM
"Wheat parishioners" Nice line..... I agree with the Rube.....:JP]
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Date: 10/15/2009 5:15:00 AM
Raul, your Haiku's are exceptional. I love your other poetry just as well. You are truly talented. Thank you for continuing to share your poetry with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:56:00 PM
Another wonderful Haiku...so unique are your poems !! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/14/2009 5:07:00 PM
Hi Raul, mail didn't come through yet. Could be the delivery system is having problems, though I did have other mail. You could email me at my home address if you like. Thanks! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:34:00 PM
What an interesting perspective. You have a gift for short verse. We are blessed that you share them with us. Thank you for this uplifting view. Karen
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:24:00 PM
Beautiful..last line a winner. Love, BG
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:05:00 PM
Very nice imagery, Raul. Love the concept of "Wheat parishioners." Very imaginative! Soup mail for you in a moment. Need some help. Thanks, Carolyn
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