Dahlias *

Just growing with the flow- flowers of the sea *sea anemone

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Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/21/2009 7:07:00 AM

Great images in this, Brian. A lovely "flowing" Lanterne! Love, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2009 4:26:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Brian. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. I hope you had a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 9/20/2009 6:01:00 PM

Hi Brian A lovely Lanterne. Yes, I can feel those flowers going with the flow in the sea. A soothing image! Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

John Freeman

Date: 9/20/2009 2:55:00 PM

Beautiful flow of flowers Brian, Thanks for comments, Sincerely Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/20/2009 10:22:00 AM

Love the poem...love the form that fits it so well. ~ Carrie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/20/2009 5:01:00 AM

good use of this form! Brian!...lilting rise in harmony...then back down the other side! ....very cool!...Jim