Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

Daft- the Elephant and the Bumble Bee

On my walk I chanced to see

An elephant with a bumble bee.

It was such a peculiar pairing,

And they had ice cream, which they were sharing.

The elephant was holding the ice cream cone

For the bee was on his mobile phone,

I thought wow, this is really *****...

I never get a signal here !

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Jan Allison November 24, 2017 at 4:07 AM Dropping back with my congrats Gary:-) hugs Jan xx Gary Smith November 24, 2017 at 10:46 AM Thank you Jan :)

Joseph May November 18, 2017 at 4:06 PM Haha...Very funny write Gary...Congrats on your win Gary Smith November 18, 2017 at 5:31 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Roy Pett November 18, 2017 at 11:21 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Gary, this is very funny and cleverly written, brilliant. :)) Gary Smith November 18, 2017 at 12:05 PM Thank you Roy :)

Gregory Richard Barden November 18, 2017 at 5:18 AM LOL - this is great, Gary - made me smile, and I needed one! Congrats! :-) Gary Smith November 18, 2017 at 5:40 AM Thank you Gregory :)

Barry Stebbings November 18, 2017 at 3:19 AM Dropping back with congratulations, Gary, well deserved. // Barry Gary Smith November 18, 2017 at 5:41 AM Thank you Barry :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 17, 2017 at 9:15 PM Back with congrats! :) xomo Gary Smith November 18, 2017 at 5:41 AM Thank you Maureen :)

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2017 at 5:11 PM Utterly FANTASTIC , Gary. Truly, I think my favorite so far of the daft ones I have seen. Gary Smith October 18, 2017 at 5:14 PM Thank you Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed my bit of daftness :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 7:01 PM LOL! Fantastic pen for this contest! My best to you :) xomo! Gary Smith October 18, 2017 at 5:31 AM Thank you Maureen :)

Barry Stebbings October 17, 2017 at 1:25 PM Ha, ha, ha - love it, Gary. Good luck in the contest. // Barry Gary Smith October 17, 2017 at 1:49 PM Thank you Barry :)

Kim Rodrigues October 17, 2017 at 9:48 AM LOL!! This is soooo cute! Love it!! Gary Smith October 17, 2017 at 9:55 AM Thank you Kim :)

Jan Allison October 17, 2017 at 7:43 AM ha ha ha that is very funny Gary:-) hugs jan xx Gary Smith October 17, 2017 at 7:44 AM Thank you Jan :)