Kash Poet Poet Couplet

Daffodils' Prayer

Swinging daffodils under the azure sky
as if thousands of butterflies waiting to fly.
In front of me upto almost horizon
nodding their yellow heads in unison.
A yellow sea amid lush green of Spring
creating waves butterflies without wings.
Praying to God each one looking towards sky
'Next time please give us wings to fly'.




© kash poet
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Len Gasun May 23, 2013 at 10:03 PM Big congratulations on your great win and fantastic poem my dear friend kash! So enjoyed! love and hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts May 23, 2013 at 1:26 AM my favourite flower Kash, loved it ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2013 at 8:57 PM hey, I looked below and saw this was another one of yours I had faved a long time ago. How cool. And congrats for your win.

Seosamh De Burca May 22, 2013 at 12:42 PM Congrats and best wishes on your win, S.

John Posey May 22, 2013 at 10:46 AM Congrads, my friend on your award winning entry... Enjoyable read... Jake

Poet Destroyer A May 22, 2013 at 9:04 AM Kash, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA

Terry L. Allen May 7, 2012 at 7:53 PM What beautiful thoughts. It sounds like you might live near a large nursery with fields of flowers. May life like a flower bloom for you. Huggs TLee

Debbie Guzzi March 27, 2012 at 8:37 AM Ma has tons of those daffodils all around her house now, I wish you and your family could come visit! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud March 4, 2012 at 7:10 AM kashi!!... what a shhhhhimering delight from your magical quill... this breathtaking offering wil surly fly with winning wings!.. woohoo.. :) huggs!

Brenda Victoria Northeast March 4, 2012 at 4:00 AM Love it Kash a beautiful picture you have painted here, Thank you, Brenda : )

Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2012 at 10:37 PM hahaha, you wrote SHHHHWillows!!! Kashinath this is one of the most beautiful ones I've seen. The imagery is fantastic, the way you make them wanting to have wings to fly. WOW. a FAVE.

Carolyn Devonshire March 3, 2012 at 2:38 PM Stunning imagery, Kash. Butterflies are so amazing and I enjoyed the way you compared them to daffodils! Best wishes in the contest, my friend. I think you know my time here is limited by my illness, but I do miss reading more of your work. Love, Carolyn

Kim Merryman March 3, 2012 at 10:43 AM This is a beautiful, descriptive write, Kash. I especially like the last line. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Joyce Johnson March 3, 2012 at 10:11 AM A great description of these beauties . Good luck in the contest and thank you for your warm comments . Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 3, 2012 at 9:20 AM an incredible write Kash.. so mesmerizing to read creative masterpiece luv.. good luck if for any dcontest .. a rare beauty ..luv..

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 3, 2012 at 8:11 AM Very beautiful, describing daffodils as wingless butterflies. Why didn't I think of that? JK...love the poem. Blessings, Rhonda

Michael J. Falotico March 3, 2012 at 7:09 AM So much beautiful poetry throughout... wonderful work as always.... Michael

Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2012 at 7:06 AM It is lovely kash.....luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise

Kash Poet March 3, 2012 at 7:05 AM Shhhhhh......some one is listening!!!