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Daffodils' Prayer

Swinging daffodils under the azure sky as if thousands of butterflies waiting to fly. In front of me upto almost horizon nodding their yellow heads in unison. A yellow sea amid lush green of Spring creating waves butterflies without wings. Praying to God each one looking towards sky 'Next time please give us wings to fly'. © kash poet ==============000================

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 10:03:00 PM

Big congratulations on your great win and fantastic poem my dear friend kash! So enjoyed! love and hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/23/2013 1:26:00 AM

my favourite flower Kash, loved it ...Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2013 8:57:00 PM

hey, I looked below and saw this was another one of yours I had faved a long time ago. How cool. And congrats for your win.

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/22/2013 12:42:00 PM

Congrats and best wishes on your win, S.

John Posey

Date: 5/22/2013 10:46:00 AM

Congrads, my friend on your award winning entry... Enjoyable read... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2013 9:04:00 AM

Kash, CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) thank you for the wonderful nature poem... Luv~ Luv~ LINDA

Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/7/2012 7:53:00 PM

What beautiful thoughts. It sounds like you might live near a large nursery with fields of flowers. May life like a flower bloom for you. Huggs TLee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/27/2012 8:37:00 AM

Ma has tons of those daffodils all around her house now, I wish you and your family could come visit! Light & Love

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2012 7:10:00 AM

kashi!!... what a shhhhhimering delight from your magical quill... this breathtaking offering wil surly fly with winning wings!.. woohoo.. :) huggs!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 3/4/2012 4:00:00 AM

Love it Kash a beautiful picture you have painted here, Thank you, Brenda : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2012 10:37:00 PM

hahaha, you wrote SHHHHWillows!!! Kashinath this is one of the most beautiful ones I've seen. The imagery is fantastic, the way you make them wanting to have wings to fly. WOW. a FAVE.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2012 2:38:00 PM

Stunning imagery, Kash. Butterflies are so amazing and I enjoyed the way you compared them to daffodils! Best wishes in the contest, my friend. I think you know my time here is limited by my illness, but I do miss reading more of your work. Love, Carolyn