Daffodil Was Proud

daffodil was proud of her sun-colored smile. waking up springtime.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/3/2019 11:35:00 AM

I like the personification in this haiku! 'Proud daffodil" -- a nice twist. :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/3/2019 2:26:00 PM

I love feeling like a daffodil. Ha! I want to be a daffodil and welcome spring!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/2/2019 5:37:00 PM

heartening all the way, caren...may the lush of spring arrive soon...huggs

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 6:50:00 PM

I would love it!

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/2/2019 6:50:00 AM

A happy poem to read today ! :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I need lots more yellow sunshine, and flowers for sure now. This has been a bleak winter here.