Seren Roberts Poet Sonnet

Daffodil - Hexsonneta Contest

A daffodil I see
yellow beautiful head
showing in barren bed
This typifies to me
Spring blooms makes me happy
Winter worries I shred

Soon the bees will be here
Pollen coating their hair
Flower to flower share
Many flowers I fear
Would die unless bees near
Working yet unaware.

A daffodil to me
Means winter woes set free

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 21, 2015 at 2:14 AM Wonderful write Seren n yet another superb win! Big congrats!

Faye Gibson September 19, 2015 at 7:34 PM Congratulations, Seren...I love daffodils, so happy in the spring.

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2015 at 4:59 PM Seren, you only got marked down for meter. But the imagery is a real delight in this one. Sweet message of spring. Congrats for your win.

Skat A September 19, 2015 at 4:24 PM Seren, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Jan Allison September 19, 2015 at 11:28 AM Dropping back with my congrats Seren:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison August 18, 2015 at 11:35 AM We are just in the process of ordering bulbs for next year - your poem is delightful Seren - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis August 18, 2015 at 4:26 AM Having a roof garden with many flowers I enjoy the visit of bees. I loved your poem dear Seren it is so peaceful and inspiring!

Eileen Manassian August 18, 2015 at 2:30 AM Lovely, Seren. This is a hard form. I'm considering giving it a go. You've done a lovely job with this theme...Love the ending two lines. :)