Daedalus and Icarus

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Daedalus And Icarus E'er thee an apparatus means to fly, Ye equaling a part of chambered lofts, Bestow upon thee that preoccupy, Serendipitous thou challenges softs. Ye, Crete's labyrinth denotes completion, I shalt ere thee pleasure my dream to be, Near its end, I urged sage words to my son, Abandon naught for the gods watch o'er thee. Ne'er neareth sea lest moisture heft thee down, Go naught neareth Sun whilst thee is in flight, Ere the wax in thy wings melt and ye drown, Heed naught, heat melted, he sank in the bight. Daedalus wept the loss of Icarus, Goddess Nemesis said due to hubris. 2020 February 27 Howmanysyllables; 14 lines x 10 syllables per = 140 syllables total

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