Daddy Loved Us

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DAD BILLY CAYCAY FORT LEE VIRGINIA

 

Seeing my Daddy in black and white moves my emotional colors
into a vibrant rainbow that was Daddy made decades ago.
Only twenty-seven in the photo, Dad's patience had yet to grow.
                    
                             Daddy loved us

My brother and I thought him old and always right with Dad powers.
He was actually quite young with wife, career and two small tykes.
Despite my flashbulb-face, I could easily visit the photograph for hours.

I know it is from Fort Lee, Virginia, and my tights have likely slid down.
I love seeing Dad's arms around us while we are leaning on his knee.
I love seeing us pressed against his chest and our heads leaning close.
                     
                            Daddy loved us

Looking at the photograph, I can completely sense him, even his skin.
My brother is four and years away from bipolar, he is still a happy boy.
I am newly three and except for tights, nothing has ever bothered me.

In this photo Daddy is visibly near, not gone as called back to heaven.
This photo wilts my composure for I dearly wish he had lived to be older.
As a retired Army officer, at sixty-seven, Agent Orange finally caught him.
 
                             Daddy loved us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 10/4/2019 5:12:00 AM
Hi CayCay! Simply put... This is a magnificent share! And congratulations. I have a black and white of Dad, Mom and yours truly. My Dad lived to be in his mid-80's. I am sorry how your Dad passed. You were just a doll! Love your brother" too This is a pearl and a FAV! Panagiota xoxoxo Panagiota
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Date: 10/3/2019 5:27:00 PM
Caycay congratulations on your win in my challenge with this terrific write. I love the photo!
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Date: 10/2/2019 11:15:00 PM
He seems like a great dad and I'm sure he would be proud that you honored him in this poem. Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Date: 9/30/2019 3:26:00 PM
Super tribute to your dad CayCay, very sad in some ways but pride comes through so very much!
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Date: 9/29/2019 12:50:00 PM
Daddy loved you both - a touching and creative write that moves the reader. I had never heard of the US forces using Agent Orange to clear forests so people couldn't hide and destroyed plant life so they couldn't eat - sad - sure it is still carried in the genes of people born after this horrific war. Sorry your Day died from this awful Agent Orange, my father died at 67 from cancer also an officer in the army until 45, when he was given a opportunity for a post in S.Africa. A fav Hugs Jenny.
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:15:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem that deserves to win something for certain. It is so sad, yet so good that you had such a wonderful love from your Daddy. It's intense and emotional and I love it. Bless you
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:25:00 PM
oh my, Caycay. Agent Orange got him? That is so tragic. I loved this and I am secretly hoping that seeing I wrote of my own father helped inspire you to finally use a father picture yourself. I love the way you kept mentioning your tights. haha. And the way you brought up your brother's "coming" illness. I see my granddaughter faved it. So I will second that emotion!
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