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Daddy


"Father does not see the mournful sad tears,
        that fall on a mossy stone;
              O, my broken heart bleeds."

And I recall running into your open arms a little girl innocent,
      You were the first man I loved, and will always be special;
The older I get, the smarter you seem to have been back then,
            My anchor, my rock, my protector, my security, my Dad.

Can I ever forget our walks hand-in-hand, in parks and woods,
      You taught me to love nature and to see with eyes open;
Hours we would sit on a park bench watching life drifting by,
            And I would ask you all kinds of silly little girl questions.

Even in death you are my guiding light, my safe harbour,
      You left me suddenly I never got to say, I love you Dad;
Tearfully, I asked you to forgive me as I held your cold hand,
            If I hurt you sorry, I forgive you also for harsh words.

I remember bringing you hot cups of tea out to your workshop,
      Sitting beside you at your dusty, cobwebby workbench;
Admiring your many rows and rows of tin cans and old bottles,
            You were always asking Mom for some kind of container.

Mom said, you kept every nail, screw or bolt you ever met,
      And  I would add, and every board too, and we would laugh;
It was me who cleaned out the workshop, O, the stabbing pain,
           I lingered there for days touching things you touched.

Dear LORD, please take care of my Daddy till I get to heaven,
      Dad, I brought you a dew-kissed yellow rose from my garden;
Of all the flowers Mother grew, you loved the yellow roses best,
            Laying it gently down on your tomb, I walk away with pride.

It was on that same workbench that I picked up your pencil,
      On the day of your death, I wrote a poem about my Daddy;
And that day I left the child that was me behind and became of poet,
           An hour after your death in that workshop I found my Muse.        


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December 31, 2015

Poetry/Kimo/Verse/Daddy
Copyright Protected, ID 15-740-246-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


For the contest, Tell Us About Your Dad, 
sponsor, Judy Konos 

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
La France Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations and the luv !
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 10:36 AM
So glad to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations.
La France Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Richard, thanks for the congratulations ~
A  Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations and the love ~
Tunick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:26 AM
What a beautiful picture.
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Howard, thanks for the beautiful !
Johnson Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:23 PM
Beautifully and lovingly written. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Joyce, thank you for the comment and the congratulations, so appreciated !
Konos Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Thank you for being in my contest your dad seems very special and I am so glad you had him and he was there for you. That is special and not something that has happened to all of us......
La France Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 12:48 AM
Judy, thank you for your contest and allowing me to tell just a bit of what my father meant to me, and I am sure the other entrants feel the same...
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January 3, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Sounds like your dad was wonderful. He loved you very much. This, I believe, is the best tribute to a dad I have ever seen. You have nothing to be sorry about at all. Some of us had abusive and terrible fathers. How sad that is for the world, but reading this tribute brings a smile to my face. How lucky you were in this regard. The way you describe the hours spent together gives us much to think about and creates a sense of hope.
La France Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 9:39 AM
Duke, thanks for that great comment, yes my dad was a wonderful man, and I was a lucky girl to have such a father as I know many do not, forever in my heart ~
Cheema Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:46 PM
And dad's hidden genes transformed the meaning of poetry! Good luck!
La France Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 1:56 PM
Balveen thanks for visiting my poem and the comment appreciate
Allison Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 5:49 PM
I can imagine you were very emotional writing this as I felt quite choked reading your tribute to your dad. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Jan thanks so much for the visit, yes, it was very difficult to write, I was surprised how many poems about my Dad I actually have, you was quite wonderful and will be forever with me every single day ~
Sage Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 5:14 PM
what a great child he has...touching
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Sage, thank you so much for visiting and for that sweet comment, appreciate ~
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 11:19 AM
Memories are important, you ar fortunate to have had such a wonderful relationship. Do drop by and visit when time permits.
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Richard, thanks for the beautiful comment, oh for sure I will drop by soon, promise ~
Palli Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:15 AM
can feel the love! superb. all the best in the contest
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Susan, oh I love the word superb and love, thank you for visiting ~
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 8:55 AM
This is supremely beautiful! I expect it will do very well. I could feel your connection with him and the little girl you used to be.
La France Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Richard, thank you for those lovely words, writing about my Dad today has brought me tears, he was a wonderful man, and our connection endures even in eternal death ~
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