Dad Never Knew His Father

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Doing family history research, I acquired the letter from the British war ministry explaining the circumstances of my grandfather's to my great-grandmother.  My grandmother never got this letter, and didn't know what to tell my father about my grandfather's death fighting the Germans in Italy during World War II.  My grandmother, father, and aunt were sent to relatives in the USA during the Blitz, and didn't return after the war.
Dad never knew his father.  That soldier died in a war.
All Dad heard was brief stories of the man that went before.
Grandma had some pictures and some medals on a wall.
But Dad never knew his father which was what mattered most of all

I’ve done some family history, and seen the ship’s manifest.
I’ve heard again the story of the good ship Lafayette--
How Grandma and her children searched the waves for periscopes,
Knowing that one torpedo could blow away all of their hopes.

This could have been in any war.  Soldiers die and families flee.
But this was the family story that was handed down to me.
It started in old England, then to an immigration line:
A 3-year-old at Ellis Island, in July 1939.

They fled their burning country, to be called “war refugees”.
With help from an old uncle and a kind community,
Grandma made a new start here in the land of liberty.
They learned that Grandpa was killed in ‘44 in Italy.

I found online the letter, that my Grandma didn’t see,
About how the Sergeant-Major’s infantry company
Was caught out in the open by Wehrmacht artillery.
The letter said he didn’t suffer.  Was he really killed instantly?

I never knew my Grandpa, though I was named after him.
Though I served a different flag, I was a soldier like him.
I’ve seen my father’s scrapbook, and Grandpa’s medals on the wall.
But I never knew my Grandpa which was what mattered most of all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/13/2016 1:03:00 AM
Mark, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:24:00 AM
Great piece, congratulations!
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:06:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on your win, in Judy Konos Dad contest. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 1/6/2016 6:04:00 AM
What a wonderfully written poem and interesting story.
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Date: 1/5/2016 9:00:00 PM
So sorry that you never knew your grandpa. I never knew mine either but it was that they died too young. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2016 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest. Your poem took a different turn and I found it amazing. You never knew your Grandpa but he's watching no doubt...and looking over you ....God Bless
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 1/5/2016 5:34:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Good contest.
Date: 2/11/2015 12:55:00 AM
Thank you for directing me to this beautifully penned poem of yours... #7... nad
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 2/11/2015 3:17:00 PM
My pleasure. We all love audiences.
Date: 6/15/2014 7:39:00 PM
Thank you for the reply...Linda
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Date: 6/11/2014 10:39:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/12/2014 2:09:00 AM
Thanks Linda; Inspired by real life. Question: how do you submit or post a contest? I have an interesting idea for a symmetrical poem based on certain prime numbers.
Date: 6/9/2014 11:13:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, Mark
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/12/2014 2:06:00 AM
Thanks. Inspired by real life.
Date: 6/9/2014 9:04:00 PM
My friend Congrats on your fine write and fine win!!!!!!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/12/2014 2:05:00 AM
Thanks. Inspired by real life.
Date: 6/9/2014 8:26:00 PM
I never knew either grandpa either and always missed that. But I had the world's best dad. congratulations on a great poem. Love, Joyce
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/11/2014 5:40:00 PM
Happily I knew my maternal grandfather until I was almost 22. Still miss him. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/31/2014 7:56:00 PM
My friend this is golden!!!! So awesome that I am going to add it to my fav!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/9/2014 9:03:00 PM
So glad I found this write by you. Your Dad was a hero and a fine father too.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 6/1/2014 12:28:00 AM
Quite a compliment. Thanks! The story is basically true.
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