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Dad At Dinner

grab onto his smile scintilla peek of normal shaken from heartbreak 7/10/2021

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Date: 7/13/2021 11:34:00 PM
tiny peek of normal; sliver of normal, but there is a spark
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2021 4:49:00 AM
So thankful there is a spark. Mostly my Dad holds back tears. :(
Date: 7/12/2021 2:07:00 PM
so interesting this is, Kim. Great way to show and not tell.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2021 5:10:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 7/11/2021 12:47:00 PM
- Oh, my dear friend ... so sad :( - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2021 1:27:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 7/11/2021 4:43:00 AM
I think we've all been there Kim, so sad. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2021 11:27:00 AM
At one time or another…mine is now. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 7/11/2021 4:37:00 AM
Only God can give comfort, Kim! Glad that he's at least smiling:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2021 11:27:00 AM
I agree. He has slight smiles and a lot of teary eyes.
Date: 7/10/2021 10:56:00 PM
Patience. Time heals all wounds though it can take time. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2021 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs.
Date: 7/10/2021 8:45:00 PM
Time does lesson all heartache. May God's love bring you and your family comfort. Warm wishes, Evelyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2021 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! Hope of a friend is comforting :)

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