Notes About The Poem

Curtains

Setting: Central Park, with a lake directly behind the character Giselle, who is sitting on a large rock.
Characters:
Giselle (G): A pretty redhead, who lives in a fantasy world, believing she is a princess.
Frog (F): A frog Giselle hears talking somewhere near the rock.
Dialogue:
F: Hey, Miss, why are you sitting on a rock?
G: What’s that? Who’s there? I heard somebody talk.
F: I’m down here, Miss, admiring your frock of pink and blue.
G: Oh my! It’s you? But you’re a frog. A frog I’m talking to?
F: Yes, but truly I’m a prince. A spell was put on me.
G: Oh my. I know your story and what will set you free.
F: You say you know my story? Whoever might you be?
G: I’m a princess searching for my prince, but nobody believes me.
F: Well, get this. Every time I talk, people think I’m croaking.
G: Wow! I hear you clearly. They’ve got to be joking.
F: You’re as pretty as a princess. It’s fate that we should meet.
G: You recognize who I am. Dear frog, you are so sweet.
F: Yes, Dear. I am a prince. You know what you must do.
G: Yes, I know what I must do to have a love that’s true.
F: Please pick me up, my darling, and give me true love’s kiss.
G: Oh, my prince. Our life will be filled with so much bliss. (she leans down to pick up the frog).
Epilogue: Caught immediately upon kissing the frog, Giselle is whisked off by her father to the mental institution from which she had fled.
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Radhakrishna Avatar
June 8, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea! Great story!! It could have a different ending! Giselle kisses the frog and changes into a frog and the two swim away to live and spawn happily ever after! Great write and rhyme is immaculate.
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 12:54 PM
That would have been a cute ending too!
Anaya Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Congratulations on your win! I thought so ;D
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 12:54 PM
Thank you
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 7:35 AM
FANTASTIC dialogue Andrea! I love it--especially the end. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. I'm still laughing! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Thanks so much
Richards Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd place in my 'Curtains' contest, Andrea. The persona of each character is clearly defined in this deceptively innocent dialogue. Then you deliver the coup de grace to Giselle with this very humorous epilogue. Regards, Suzette
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:40 PM
Thanks so much. I really enjoyed this contest once I put my mind to it.
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 12:02 PM
That ending wasnt what i expected! How clever! Made me smile and how well written! The flow is seamless and kept me hooked from the very start! And the picture also goes so well with what youv written! So good! Youv nailed it sweet andrea! Pleasure always reading your work! Sending you light!
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 4:47 PM
Good. I wanted it to be a twist. I blame fairy tales for making me expect so much out of "love"
Buhagiar Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Loved the twist at the end. Poor princess!! Great idea. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Glad you liked it
Proxenos Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 12:19 AM
Such a laugh in a sad way though, great imagination my friend Andrea. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Thanks
Hawley Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 6:09 PM
Dang-it daddy! You ruined the fantasy that this beauty created, if only in her mind! Oh well, reality calls for thee dearest dreamer.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 6:35 PM
Hahaha. Do you remember the Once Upon a Time series. That show got SO OLD I wanted to end it just like this poem here!!
Narain Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 11:23 AM
A nice story, teh last line may be funny, but think what happens to the girl[s dreams. Nice one.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 4:01 PM
thanks, the girl was made up anyway. haha!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 7:49 AM
A fun story/write/picture..... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..................
Beaufort Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 6:42 AM
Andrea, This is really funny. I didn't skip ahead to the last line and you got me! And I am still smiling from the last one. The title becomes so appropriate once read completely.
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Thanks, Duke, the ending is my favorite part.
Roper Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Good one, Andrea.
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