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Curtain Call

Maple trees on both sides of Nineteenth Street closed down the evening sky. In a slight uncovered slice a single star was made to burn the brighter by this focusing framework. I wonder, were your drapes drawn not quite tight to burn your beauty on the night?

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Date: 1/22/2019 8:43:00 AM
Not bad, me personally i would like to see more B's in it. You should check out the aliteration i did. The poems called All I's on me
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John Conde
Date: 2/12/2019 3:18:00 AM
Maybe i was misinformed, i see what your doing now, i thought alliteration was sticking with the same letter throughout.