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Curious. How we view ourselves, while on the slab we lie Knowing forever shut, earthly windows, our eyes Modesty behind us now, embarrassment we don't feel Our flesh, we don't cringe away, from the frigid stainless steel To look with no emotion, incisions, from the autopsy knife Every muscle utterly still, relaxed as never in life No blood to rush a blush, our cheeks a pallid waxy grey Lividity of our skin, shows how in death we'd lain Enevitably we will be reduced to a dusty grime Either by an uncaring fire, or the mercy of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/17/2010 4:30:00 PM
I really liked this poem, dark and erie but so true about life. Thanks for the Monsoon contest, and I look forward for a chance for first place, in another one of yours soon :) much love for your comment on my work, I appreciate it!
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:00:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Paula. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:44:00 AM
sobering! for sure! good work! Paula! gemini jim
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Date: 6/10/2010 5:06:00 PM
interesting writek, enjoyed.. smiles:)
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