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Cupid's Lucky Shot

Looking to find a four leaf clover Or a lucky star for a wish Cupid's arrow flew right over I was told he never missed A rabbit's foot might do the trick Or perhaps a lucky penny Love potions leave me feeling sick I know cause I've taken many Love's never been a friend of mine Though we have spent time together Not the sort of friend to find Only sticking around in fair weather On second thought I'll take a pass I'm glad it flew right by Cause if he'd shot me in my ass Then I'd have blacked his eye an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/9/2016 6:52:00 PM

Very good Daniel; if he shot you in the bum he was way off target - Lindsay

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/11/2016 9:52:00 PM

I'm a big boy if he hits me it'll be in my bum. LOL Just joking! Thank you, Lindsay, I like humor, and I hope it made you smile. Peace my friend:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2016 3:12:00 PM

great Valentine humor here, Or I should say Cupid humor! i enjoyed this one a lot, DAniel. A SEVEN

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/7/2016 3:23:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm glad I made you smile:) Peace to you my friend and have a good evening with your family:)

Red Fiery

Date: 3/6/2016 8:06:00 AM

Wow! I like the way you ended this magnificent piece...very very clever...7/7

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/6/2016 8:56:00 AM

Thank you young lady, I appreciate that and I hope I made you smile. I have found that humor leaves a longer lasting impression and besides I love to laugh. Peace to you and come back and see me some time, we'll laugh together:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/5/2016 4:13:00 PM

Lol, clever and fun poem. I'm such a superstitious I might have all of the above in my pocket. Lol, Cupid isn't a friend so, I know this arrow went right over my kukoo nest.... Awesome poem. Linda

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2016 4:26:00 PM

Thank you, Linda. I'm glad I made you smile. I appreciate your support and always enjoy your comments. peace my friend:)

Lin Lane

Date: 3/5/2016 1:53:00 PM

He won't be taking shots at me either, Danny. He's been warned. Nice write.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2016 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, Peaches. I hope I made you smile. Peace my dear friend:)

Jean Murray

Date: 3/5/2016 8:51:00 AM

Nothing like this tonic on a cold morning. Thank you Daniel.

Daniel Turner
Date: 3/5/2016 9:43:00 AM

I'm glad you enjoyed! Peace lovely lady:)