Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

Cupid's Lucky Shot

Looking to find a four leaf clover
Or a lucky star for a wish
Cupid's arrow flew right over
I was told he never missed

A rabbit's foot might do the trick
Or perhaps a lucky penny
Love potions leave me feeling sick
I know cause I've taken many

Love's never been a friend of mine
Though we have spent time together
Not the sort of friend to find
Only sticking around in fair weather

On second thought I'll take a pass
I'm glad it flew right by
Cause if he'd shot me in my ass
Then I'd have blacked his eye



  an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Lindsay Laurie March 9, 2016 at 6:52 PM Very good Daniel; if he shot you in the bum he was way off target - Lindsay Daniel Turner March 11, 2016 at 9:52 PM I'm a big boy if he hits me it'll be in my bum. LOL Just joking! Thank you, Lindsay, I like humor, and I hope it made you smile. Peace my friend:)

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2016 at 3:12 PM great Valentine humor here, Or I should say Cupid humor! i enjoyed this one a lot, DAniel. A SEVEN Daniel Turner March 7, 2016 at 3:23 PM Thank you, Andrea. I'm glad I made you smile:) Peace to you my friend and have a good evening with your family:)

Red Fiery March 6, 2016 at 8:06 AM Wow! I like the way you ended this magnificent piece...very very clever...7/7 Daniel Turner March 6, 2016 at 8:56 AM Thank you young lady, I appreciate that and I hope I made you smile. I have found that humor leaves a longer lasting impression and besides I love to laugh. Peace to you and come back and see me some time, we'll laugh together:)

Poet Destroyer A March 5, 2016 at 4:13 PM Lol, clever and fun poem. I'm such a superstitious I might have all of the above in my pocket. Lol, Cupid isn't a friend so, I know this arrow went right over my kukoo nest.... Awesome poem. Linda Daniel Turner March 5, 2016 at 4:26 PM Thank you, Linda. I'm glad I made you smile. I appreciate your support and always enjoy your comments. peace my friend:)

Lin Lane March 5, 2016 at 1:53 PM He won't be taking shots at me either, Danny. He's been warned. Nice write. Daniel Turner March 5, 2016 at 3:29 PM Thank you, Peaches. I hope I made you smile. Peace my dear friend:)

Jean Murray March 5, 2016 at 8:51 AM Nothing like this tonic on a cold morning. Thank you Daniel. Daniel Turner March 5, 2016 at 9:43 AM I'm glad you enjoyed! Peace lovely lady:)