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Cupid's Golden Bow

Cupid's golden bow and arrow in hand always hits the target to the tightest degree shedding his green skin like the chameleon he is the frog began drowning non-stop smiling as he fell deeper into ocean colors of all shades a pearl in a deep pool of beauty bathing so bright he felt an electric bolt filled with deep undercurrents string sparks fly in the first kiss with all feeling and intention String sparks sizzilin' fly in the first kiss and bring dazzling amazing golden warm struck straight but oh so gallant and oh so wonderful In the heart on fire within passion hot underneath the stars sailing of into space inside floating around thoughts off the first mate desires your affectionate smiles, laughs, and grins sings in the mind's eye grace of a thousand swans in flight into another space over the Milky Way jewels sparkles a star tender doting to the soul's eyes floating to you bouncing inside waves steaming hot seductive lashes floating through those curtains we join souls uniting tender wooing and wonderful woven passion softly we forever kiss my love as desire always lays with you I need and crave your love to take me to the edge of the night dancing in my dreams struck deeply while turning this world upside down into a golden paradise ball with all bells and whistles that I've wished in my life Cupid's golden bow and arrow in hand always hits the target tight and perfect Always! Always! Always! Always! Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman, Collaborative Free Verse Poem, October 16. 2014

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Date: 10/27/2014 1:32:00 PM
A great co-write my friend, good luck in the contest take care cheri
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Date: 10/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
What a wonderful collaboration! WOW - I am so impressed with the amazing imagery in this well-articulated beautiful piece! Bravo, my friend! Pandita
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/19/2014 7:10:00 PM
stunning beautiful comment pandita gary and myself really jelled on this one thank you kindly dear friend
Date: 10/16/2014 7:14:00 AM
Ow my God I'm touched with bows and arrows,if that can be an expression.You two Wow.A favourite.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 7:38:00 AM
thank you kindly charmaine for the dazzling beautiful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 10/16/2014 6:00:00 AM
How alive with beauty and light and passion....Always! Great collab, you two. I enjoyed so many of these lines....Beautiful, indeed!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 6:29:00 AM
thank you eileen for the sweet beautiful comment gary is fun to write with, it just flows our styles together blending in this
Date: 10/16/2014 5:52:00 AM
- Yes, so gallant and oh so beautifully written by both of you Liam & Gary !! - Yes it's true: "Cupid's golden bow and arrow in hand always hits the target tight and perfect" .... (7)..... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/16/2014 6:25:00 AM
anne lise its magical writing with gary thank you deeply dear friend truly appreciated wonderful comment

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