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Cupid's Arrow

Cupid’s Arrow Cupid’s arrow has a flaw, It always seems to fall short. Love has teeth and claws, And it isn’t a mere sport. Cupid’s arrow has a flaw, And it doesn’t cause love. It seems to cause strife and makes us bawl, It is most definitely not like a dove. Cupid’s arrow has a flaw, It seems to freeze a heart. Perhaps not all, But it tears mine apart. Cupid’s arrow has a flaw, I watch it gently nudge others into love. For me it's like a saw, Not a gentle shove. Cupid’s arrow has a flaw, Maybe one day he’ll set it right. But for now I’ll avoid love’s jaw, May the future be bright.

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Date: 3/9/2020 5:44:00 AM
Sabrina, Like the way you repeat your opening line with each stanza for emphasis. We definitely have to take Cupid's arrow aims with a grain of salt. Thanks for sharing. - Have a good day, Gail
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Date: 2/15/2020 2:06:00 PM
Nice poem. I always thought cupid was a little mean hearted...perhaps his father was the trickster.
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:56:00 AM
yes... Cupid was blind... so thats why... great poem...
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