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Cupid's Aim

See that winged fellow His arrow poised to let fly Better take more careful aim Last love hit in rear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/16/2011 10:24:00 PM
haha, THis is cute, Barbara!!
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Date: 3/16/2011 4:17:00 PM
Now this is a real kickass poem, dear LNC. Love your take on the contest! I just want the "winged fellow" to stay away from me. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 11:50:00 AM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 3/16/2011 8:02:00 AM
Barb, this was really charming & cute. :)
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Date: 3/16/2011 7:54:00 AM
Last love hit in rear. Nice twist of irony, Barbara. Haaa! Best to your poem's a success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:30:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Barbara
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