Cupid's Aim

See that winged fellow His arrow poised to let fly Better take more careful aim Last love hit in rear
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 10:24 PM
haha, THis is cute, Barbara!!
Devonshire Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 4:17 PM
Now this is a real kickass poem, dear LNC. Love your take on the contest! I just want the "winged fellow" to stay away from me. Love, Carolyn
Muzzey Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
Tacito Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Barb, this was really charming & cute. :)
Freeman Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Last love hit in rear. Nice twist of irony, Barbara. Haaa! Best to your poem's a success. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 16, 2011 at 6:30 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest, Barbara
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace