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Cupid Pulls Back the Bow

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I feel the everything of you, through spring... through fall my breath would run across the towers of sky blue and petals bless our crowning sun, to grasp a language still undone. Arrows brush lips , never amiss , beholding sighs fragrant as dew which glaze the rawness of a kiss; then softens late evening, anew till we join freely in life's bliss. ----------- 1/08/2017 CUPID PULLS BACK THE BOW A Mystic Rose Contest

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Date: 1/9/2017 1:06:00 PM
Beautifully wriiten Nette, The imagery and words are lovely!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 1/8/2017 12:17:00 PM
Excellent nette. Imagery that comes alive. Should have placed much higher. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/8/2017 10:09:00 AM
Arrows brush lips, rawness of a kiss! Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 1/7/2017 11:39:00 PM
Ok, You have melted both me and my heart!
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Date: 1/7/2017 7:16:00 PM
Your poems are flawless and have that mysterious glow about it and this one sparks of love's rhapsody!
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Date: 1/7/2017 7:06:00 PM
Don't make me fall in love with any girl I would meet right now. I'm in a trance!
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Date: 1/7/2017 6:42:00 PM
What love, beautifully written.
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