Carrie Richards Poet Footle

Cupid On the Loose

First rate
blind date!

Like fate
soul mates!

First base....
Hearts race

Gets late....
Bed mates

Birth rate
Inflates!!


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For Dane Anne's Valentine Footle contest

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Natalie The Rogue Rhymer February 11, 2012 at 1:51 PM Carrie-This is so good! I like the progression-I did mine like that too. Great minds think alike :) Thanks for you very nice comments!

Andrea Dietrich February 10, 2012 at 6:00 PM hahaha, ANOTHER awesome one and I see many people are doing theirs like an actual poem, whereas I did individual poems within the poem. I hope I did not shoot myself in the foot doing it my way!!

Samual Ronthorpe February 9, 2012 at 12:25 PM Very nice footles. Sounds like another winner for Carrie. Good luck in your contest..................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Eastman February 9, 2012 at 8:12 AM Ooopppsie on the birth rate. Very interesting footsie.

Kash Poet February 9, 2012 at 1:16 AM Haha...a very good ending.Enjoyed these footles very much.Best wishes.

Kim Merryman February 8, 2012 at 9:14 PM I like the progression, Carrie. Good ones. Love, Kim

Robert Pettit February 8, 2012 at 8:59 PM Great set of footles Carrie.