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Cupid Mu-St-Se

Cupid must use
       rounded
         rubber-tipped
           arrows

     Let him order
       some real
         zingers
           from Eros

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Caren Krutsinger

November 11, 2021 at 12:12 PM

Real "zingers" - like the double meaning here.

Gershon Wolf

November 12, 2021 at 10:50 AM

Zing Zong Zang ~ Andrew Yang

Mike Gentile

November 6, 2021 at 12:47 PM

When I was young, Cupid was hitting me every other week, finally must have used real arrows, 36 years ago on me!! Happy Saturday !

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:23 PM

Hope you've recovered from the initial sting by now, Mike. :) gw (Cupid ain't stupid).

Heidi Sands

November 5, 2021 at 7:44 PM

Great one Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:20 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi. Have a blessed Sunday, Gershon

Debra L Brown

November 5, 2021 at 6:45 PM

Hi! Gershon, Cute and clever ~ Debbie

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:27 PM

-- And lucky too. Thanks, Debbie. Happiness and Joy, gw

Terry Flood

November 5, 2021 at 3:39 PM

Too good, Gershon. Though, with some couples I’ve come across… I think one of them is firing hand grenades! Terry

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:27 PM

I'm laughing away at your comment here, Terry... Uh-oh! Looks like one of those there grenades comin---

Judy Ball

November 5, 2021 at 1:34 PM

Too cute Gershon. As long as the arrows don't bo9unce off. God Bless, JB

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:20 PM

If too many arrows stick, however, one may come to look like a porcupine or a hedgehog. Eeeek! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 5, 2021 at 12:18 PM

Hello Gershon, Oh ! then when the arrows are aimed into the couple it would not be felt. Yetit would be there. I get it. enjoy your day my friend.

Rico Leffanta

November 5, 2021 at 11:58 AM

I did wonder how "erose" always makes it into crossword puzzles . . . .

Gershon Wolf

November 6, 2021 at 9:14 PM

Don't you just get 'cross' when that happens? lol. Thanks, Rico. :) gw

Ilene Bauer

November 5, 2021 at 9:42 AM

Ha! Very clever, Gershon!

Gershon Wolf

November 5, 2021 at 10:31 AM

Glad you agree with me: Cupid's not Stupid! lol. :) gw

Joseph P. DiMino

November 5, 2021 at 6:36 AM

Soft tips arrows for soft hearts. The hardened ones do not love well, nor long. Excellent read. Enjoy your retirement. Sanders sold a lot of chicken in his. Have a great day, Gershon. I've been trying some woodworking...did not know I could do such nice things. Have to remember to wear a mask though -- in this case, I am all for it.

Gershon Wolf

November 5, 2021 at 10:31 AM

Right! Want to keep the chip(s) on the shoulder, not in the eyes! ~ Woodie

Regina Mcintosh

November 5, 2021 at 5:47 AM

Hi Gershon, Awesome write... Hope you're well. I haven't heard from you and hoped I hadn't done anything to keep you away. Many prayers and blessings, Love, Gina

Gershon Wolf

November 5, 2021 at 7:04 AM

Thank you, Regina... My loss, really, for not viewing your inspirational poetry... Sometimes I get stuck in ruts, I guess. Thanks for the little jolt. I shall do better. Have a wonderful Friday, Gershon

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