Cupid Falls In Love


He ran around shooting unsuspecting souls with his golden tip arrows
and one perfectly bent, Port Orford Cedar bow. Wearing nothing 
but a diaper and a silly grin he aimed, shut one eye then Wham! 

love is dapper always a gentleman respectively yours
He studied at the Rose City Archery where all smart Cupids go for an education on falling in love! What he wasn't expecting was some day he would fall for a crazy red head who was a Pixie in disguise.
he leveled the arrow it ricocheted back to his heart
She baked him cinnamon hearts both spicy and hot to the taste. Then she took him to a magical place where every day felt like Valentine's day. It wasn't long before a winged infant carrying a bow and a quiver of arrows bounced up and down on Cupid's knee.
I'm a Cupid he said to his daddy with Pixie Ma, Whoo-ee

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Date: 2/6/2024 10:25:00 PM
delicios and original, soon will come saint Valentine, for everyone, enjoyed my reading, thanks poet
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/7/2024 3:35:00 AM
Love is what makes the world go round Yann, thanks for your visit here much appreciated :)
Date: 2/6/2024 12:34:00 PM
Sweet rose, these stories just comes naturally for you i believe, I absolutely loved this. So cute and fun, and entertaining. And the flow is brilliant too. This might be one of the most creative haibuns iv read and fits the mood right now too doesnt it! Loved this sweet rose! The ending made me smile hah! You are a brilliant poetess with an imaginative mind: pleasure reading your work
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/6/2024 6:27:00 PM
I love telling stories Ink, I get that from my late Grandma, who used to tell us stories when we were small about Sir Lancelot , and the old castles and Kingdoms,
Date: 2/6/2024 10:44:00 AM
Quite a fun poem, Mystic Rose. it's been ages since I celebrated Valentine's Day. Hugs.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/6/2024 6:26:00 PM
Maybe go to the florist and buy yourself a flower, on behalf of your dear Lily, she will see it from heaven and smile !
Date: 2/6/2024 9:07:00 AM
Really cute and fantastical. :)
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/6/2024 6:25:00 PM
Thanks for dropping in Linda, :)
Date: 2/6/2024 6:24:00 AM
So very delightful a depiction --aptly cherishing love in honor of Valentines Day. Much enjoyed your story, Vienna.
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/6/2024 6:25:00 PM
I cherish each Valentine Vijay, love should always be celebrated each year, :)
Date: 2/6/2024 4:37:00 AM
- Oh, Vie Rose ... this is beautifully written :) - hugs
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/6/2024 6:25:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Anne, God bless
Date: 2/6/2024 4:21:00 AM
Wowww, what an adorable tale this is, my dear sweet Rose..This poem reflects how impeccable are your storytelling skills, your words brought me a huge smile today, awwn.. The Cupid falling in love and then "It wasn't long before a winged infant carrying a bow and a quiver of arrows bounced up and down on Cupid's knee, we got another Cupid, Tee Hee" Gosh, that's absolutely profound and so cute!! You really nailed this haibun..I was smiling all the way..A lovely write indeed and a FAV for sure! :)
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Date: 2/6/2024 6:24:00 PM
Just having fun for Valentine, I love the season of love and its always nice to get in the spirit of things, thanks for reading Hiya, :)
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