Cupid

On Valentine's Day Cupid rules,
A bow and arrow his trusty tools.
He shoots an arrow at a he,
Then takes aim at a she,
And they both become lovesick fools.

2/4/12
Kim Merryman for Linda-Marie's February Funny Bone contest.
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Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 8:14 PM
VERY fun limericking, Kim. It's so true of Cupid!!!
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 1:47 PM
Good limerick Kim, good luck in the contest.Happy Valetines Day,roses vill be good. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Song Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:26 PM
Kim...you went all out with this February limerick! Nice love twist in here too. It will do extremely well. Gwendolen
Fitzgerald Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 2:19 PM
Big smiles Kim and much enjoyed Hugs Declan x
Onclaud Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:56 AM
oh this is so witty and engaging, kim... woof! i like how this ended... cupid is on the run these days.. winning wishes and huggs!:)
Syed Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Funny!:) great going! best wishes.... sadaf
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 10:18 PM
and then love rules .... great poetry babe!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 8:20 PM
Very cute limerick! Sounds like a winner. Blessings, Rhonda
Macfarlane Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 7:32 PM
A charming write....good luck in the contest.
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 7:21 PM
This is a delight! That clever little matchmaker!
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