Cup Premiere Contest Winner

The love I have for you wakes me at night.
It sends me out at all hours shouting, 
Darting down the sidewalk in both directions.
It never smiles and always expects the worst.
It looks for you when you’re already there.

The love I have hollows me out with bombs when I sleep,
Then packs the broken spaces with flowers and scenes recalled, 
Of walks to the car wash when you were three, 
A spit-matted bear, clutched at your tiny hip.
 
I have no choice in loving you,
As much as a cat has whenever it bathes
Or a bird born knowing how nests are made.
So too am I mastered by codes too old and close to see,

How you’re in a cup in the hands of life
And the worried cup is me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/15/2025 9:52:00 AM
Daniel, congrats on your top win! First line pulls me in…the darting seems chaotic..never smiles, expects the worst…I have no choice in loving you…like the first line catches my eye…all of this is so good and ao raw.
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 5/16/2025 4:05:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. 'Cup' is the fruits of my ongoing quest in writing to keep things short and punchy. I appreciate your noticing. : )
Date: 5/14/2025 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your trophy win in my contest, The Duality of Motherhood, with this poem that showcases your technical and poetic prowess, seamlessly integrating oscillation through imagery and rhythm. The movement between anxiety and tenderness feels effortless, reinforcing maternal paradoxes with intuitive cadence. Thank you for supporting my contest. Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/17/2025 11:42:00 AM
I apologise for the error re your name, Daniel. You are still a worthy winner of the trophy, Regards, Su
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Daniel DuBois
Date: 5/16/2025 4:09:00 PM
Hi, this is Daniel. Thank you! I appreciate the opportunity, Suzette.
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