Cumulus Clouds

white cotton candy
formed by whisked dust water ice...
    strewn over bare sky

23-7-2020

Second place in the contest.
Note: Haiku or Senryu poetry Contest
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Date: 8/2/2020 5:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win, V.
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V. Deepa
Date: 8/3/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thankyou line mam for your kind visit and appreciation:-) Have a blessed day.With love~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/29/2020 4:56:00 PM
Deepa, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/30/2020 5:26:00 AM
Hello Constance mam, Thankyou very much for the honour which you shower and for the kind encouragement & appreciations:-)Am glad you liked it.Have a wonderful day.Much love:-)
Date: 7/28/2020 12:09:00 PM
Ah! Loved the cotton candy reference Deepa. Simply enchanting :) Congratulations on your win :) Much love!
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/29/2020 4:42:00 AM
Oh thankyou sissy:-) I love eating cotton candy ,so just tried referring to clouds as the imagery syncs well:-) Am glad you loved it:-) Much love:-)
Date: 7/27/2020 10:50:00 AM
This is lovely imagery, Deepa, waiting to catch the attention of painters in search of inspiration! ~ Congratulations on this fine win of yours:) Warm regards // paul
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:03:00 PM
Hello Paul sir, Thanks a bunch for your wonderful review.I feel delighted to read these lovely words of appreciation from you sir..:-) Have a blessed day. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
Date: 7/26/2020 10:36:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Deepa.. Congrats on your great win..
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:48:00 AM
Hello Jenish sir, Good Afternoon.:-) Thankyou for the constant support and kind reviews.I feel delighted by your visits:-) Have a great day.Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/26/2020 7:36:00 PM
back with my congrats. Keep up the great work!
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:45:00 AM
Hello Andrea mam, Thanks a lot for cheering me always.:-) Have a lovely day.~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/26/2020 4:11:00 PM
Deepa, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:44:00 AM
Hello Eve mam, Thankyou for the constant support and appreciation:-) Have a beautiful day. Much love sent to you~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/26/2020 3:59:00 PM
superb imagery V Deepa:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:42:00 AM
Hello Jan mam, Thankyou for the warm appreciation and love:-) Have a wonderful day. Much love~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/26/2020 11:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/27/2020 12:41:00 AM
Hello Anne mam, Thanks a lot for the lovely appreciation:-) Have a lovely day.Take care. With love~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/24/2020 3:59:00 PM
glorious imagery!
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/25/2020 11:16:00 AM
Oh...Thankyou dear Andrea mam for your kind review.:-) Have a great day.With love~Deepa
Date: 7/23/2020 11:07:00 AM
Hello Deepa, oh Deepa this is lovely. Enjoy your day my friend. Much love Darlene
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/24/2020 12:02:00 AM
Hello Darlene mam, Thankyou very much:-) Enjoy your day too. Take care.Much love~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/23/2020 6:09:00 AM
A stunning image Deepa. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/23/2020 10:25:00 AM
Hello Tom Sir, Thankyou for your constant support , appreciations and blessings:-) I believe your doing fine. Have a wonderful day. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)
Date: 7/23/2020 5:38:00 AM
A scientifically metaphorically profoundly fabulous haiku, a fave for this mam. My best to you in the contest (already a winner for me)! xomo
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V. Deepa
Date: 7/23/2020 10:23:00 AM
Wow...Mo mam, You've gracefully appreciated me by strapping the astounding words together:-*.Am happy that you loved this work of mine.:-) Thanks for always encouraging & cheering me up.Your fave means a lot to me. Have a beautiful day.Much love~Deepa:-)
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