Cul-De-Sac

Stars were twinkling high, glinting moonlit sky,
As missives of love on scarlet winds buoyed 
Indulging passionate desires, enamoring pleas
Of elated longings, strumming pulse of glee,
Spurring romance, blooming heart’s dream,
As you arrived cheering fervid night of spring.

Oh, how I missed a beat, lauding your beauty,
When you enticed me, smiling affectionately,
Alluring with a glance that dazzled in promise
Of our magical evening enchanting, esoteric,
As together we propelled to world of fantasy
Beyond realm ordinary, scripting fabled story.

Alas! as we approached a paradise heavenly,
How playfully you blew a kiss, abandoning me,
On auriferous cul-de-sac of forbidden street
When you entered a glittering palace for fairies;
Leaving me in awe of a world ornate, unique,
A land of mythical vitality, of utopian ecstasy.

Beyond hope, beyond reach, as you vanished,
No path I could see past the forbidden street,
Trapping me where I idolized your heartbeats;
Perplexed, yet cognizant, here I would rather be,
Hypnotized in your reality of a flirtatious night,
Exploring reveries beyond cul-de-sac of my life.

February 21, 2023
Placed 1st: This or That, Vol 16 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Buehler Avatar
July 1, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Sensuous and lovely. Stunning imagery. Belated congratulations. :)
Callus Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Congratulations, Vijay, on your top placement. Enjoyed the poem; how near and yet so far away could love and happiness be in life! ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Congrats on first place win. Way to go, vijay.
Sparrow Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 10:09 AM
How unique to use such an everyday thing as a cul-de-sac as metaphor! Truly, there is no place to go! Perhaps the mythical land has a little side street that may lead to the highway? Nicely turned, my poetic friend.
Ibeh Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your first place when with this superlative write, Vijay:-) I absolutely loved it!
Pandit Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Much appreciate your kind feedback, Edward. Many thanks for your visit and special thanks for sponsoring contests with very cool themes.
Fowler Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 1:47 PM
The cul-de-sac of life, your life. Enchanting my friend Vijay. Congratulations! :)
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Glad to see you again Linda. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.
Kauffman Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 10:15 AM
As always, Vijay, your rich imagery expresses a wide range of strong emotions from joy to pensive melancholy. Wonderfully crafted and beautifully spoken! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:10 PM
So very kind of you Sam. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback. Many thanks.
Poet Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Vijay, It's no surprise that Edward chose this poem to reflect the very best of the contest; my sincerest congratulations go out to you on your well-deserved win, dear friend.
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:09 PM
Thank you friend. I am happy to read your feedback. Much appreciate your visit, Lasaad.
George Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:47 AM
I knew this would make into first place win. Congratulations dear Vijay. Glad I could share the podium win with you ...
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:08 PM
I am honored to share the place with you my friend. Many thanks for visiting again, Valsa. Much appreciate, as always.
Proxenos Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 3:05 AM
Who knows Vijay, that cul de sac could become a loving busy highway which would mean that your awesome flirtatious night would occur over and over again.. What a passionate write, excellent creative poetry my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Glad to see you again my friend. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Jennifer. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 4:40 AM
Vijay, your romantic style abounds in this beautiful write!Only you could have penned it! Good luck and Happy Saturday!
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:06 PM
So nice to hear that, Mike. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Wow a poem of romance much more enticing. Great write, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Wow you made the street name into a romantic fantasy!
Pandit Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 4:05 PM
Many thanks Andrea. Always a joy when you visit.
Horsman Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 5:51 PM
The Imagery superb, my friend and so is the poetry. Harry
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thank you Harry. Sending goodwill wishes your way for continued recovery and good health.
Turner Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Love beneath the stars. What could be more romantic? A pleasure to read you today, Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Daniel. Many thanks for stopping by.
Sands Avatar
February 23, 2023 at 7:04 AM
Very well written my friend. You are such a talented writer! Blessings :)
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your supportive comments, as always, Heidi.
George Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:16 PM
How magnificently you have connected your topic with pulsating romance ! This is an unusually beautiful poem, emotionally charged and pulsating with amorous and erotic overtones. Into my FAVE
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:36 AM
So very kind of you to say so, Valsa. Glad to hear that from a talented writer. Honored to receive your FAVE. Many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 6:35 PM
how playful you are with your words Vijay, you have a way of allowing the reader to lose themselves in your cadence , beautiful !
Pandit Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 6:34 AM
So nice to hear that my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks, Vienna. Many thanks.
DiMino Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 12:15 PM
"Oh, how I missed a beat, lauding your beauty, When you enticed me, smiling affectionately, Alluring with a glance that dazzled in promise" -- though burned often, we go back to that flame of romance, as moths...wings smoking. We keep our cul-de-sac sacred as well...for what is ecstasy, were it not for only occasional chance to leap from fluid entrapment -- able at rare times to escape from our sea and taste a bit of ever flirting free sky before falling back into soggy reality? Love your poem. Well done.
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:54 PM
Thank you my friend for your eloquent insights. Romance takes the pen to passionate destinations escaping reality--as you say. Enjoyed reading your feedback, Joe. Many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Vivid, moving details woven together by your two meanings of "cul-de-sac, Vijay"! Janice
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:50 PM
You are right about the two contexts for cul-de-sac--thanks for noticing and commenting about it. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Janice. Many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Wow! Mesmerizing indeed! Nice one, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:48 PM
So nice to read your comments, Kim. Much appreciate your visit. Many thanks.
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Great use of metaphors and romance Vijay, this will do well in contest, but good luck anyway. Tom
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 1:48 PM
Thank you Tom. Much appreciate, as always.
Eslinger Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:35 AM
This poem paints a very magical scene, which ddoes pose an enticing choice to the lover of fantasy, like me, too. But, Aha! I think i’ll dtay in my bed awhile and read more poetry. Delightful poem!
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Enjoy your rest while you dwell in poetry--a wonderful way to spend quality time. I enjoyed reading your kind thoughts, Sally. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Sorry I'm late. No electricity today. Beautiful poem with great arguments littered with metaphors and imagery. Loved the idea of a cul-de-sac.
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:33 AM
Sorry to hear that you have no electricity today. Hoping things will return to normal soon. Much appreciate your supportive comments, Victor. Many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Fantastic poem, Vijay, metaphorical indeed:)
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 8:31 AM
So nice to hear that. Much appreciate your kind feedback, Jo. Many thanks.
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