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Cuckoo - B

invasion descendants deposed cunning cuckoo ----------------------- (c) John C Michaels, February 2017 I've posted two Haiku variants on the same theme: one is the traditional 5-7-5 form ("Cuckoo - A") and the other is me branching out to try a more contemporary style ("Cuckoo - B"). I hope you like them both.

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Date: 2/19/2017 7:04:00 PM
Great to see you tried contemporary. Let me see how it stacks up to the other version now.
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Date: 2/25/2017 4:40:00 AM
Thanks for suggesting it... glad you like this one.

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