Cuckoo

Far away in a
                land torn with war,
             she looked for a home. 
          She was not as pretty as 
       doves adorning lush gardens, 
           as exuberant as ducks to                    play     
             with,neither as useful               as pigeons  
              in war. The lonely                 little cuckoo  
              flew from burnt             trees to desolate 
            orchards. A black          bird with yellow    
         spots on her feathers     that other birds     
      found ugly. She looked for a home where 
     she'd be accepted for who she was. The  
      world hurled poisonous arrows at her. 
      Wounded, she fell in a garden waiting 
       to die until two little human hands 
        cocooned her. A girl nursed her agony 
          and made her feel  loved. All her sorrow 
          began to melt and pour as rain on the fiery
           land. She cried with her heart,  her honeyed 
            voice, never heard before. The  little girl danced
              in joy and kissed her wings to   let her fly but 
                little  cuckoo sang to a world    lost in pain, her
                  music blooming pink buds,        rushing through
                    blue rivulets, swaying                branches with 
                      soothing wind, caressing         parched souls, 
                       raising spirits  of warriors            with hope. 
                          She stayed for  love,                     ecstatic   
                            at her newfound lilac                      tune. 
                               She'd found home 
                                  in a         land 
                                  torn         with 
                               w  ar to      dr en ch
                              it  wi  th        h  e  r 
                            di   vi   ne        s  o   ng.

July 11, 2020

Bird Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Constance La France
~Winner: 1st Place

~Poem of the Day: July 13, 2020

~Ranked #3 in Best New Poems for July 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Singh Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 4:43 AM
Di, loved it!
Kaufman Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 10:52 AM
OMG what a poem..loved it..loved ..it..loved it
Shatry Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 7:27 AM
Great words, sentiments and very clever format! Well, how nice to see that even birds can see others as ugly. Maybe humanity isn't beyond redemption after all! Enjoyed this.
Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 7:58 PM
This poem is divine. I loved it. Great work Aditi Congo on your win
Hamilton Avatar
August 12, 2020 at 7:41 PM
A stunning write and visually excellent, a worthy winner I see and extra congrats are in order for POTD, and also this is now on the top100 all time poems I think number 55 or so. A super write Aditi all the accolades will keep coming no doubt. I am so happy for you!
Stiles Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Incredible poetry and form. SImply magnificent. Terri
Canerdy Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:58 PM
Words fail me right now. I'll just say FABULOUS--creatively and skillfully composed, relating an uplifting and moving story, Aditi! CONGRATS!! Janice
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:38 AM
Thank you for your visit and such kind appreciation Janice. Your encouraging words mean a lot to me. Much love :)
Proxenos Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 2:42 PM
Kudos my friend, what an extraordinary poem, a poem of the highest creativity I have ever seen, a very deserving honor bestowed on you for this awesome POTD. Blessings, and Hugs, Jennifer.
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:38 AM
Glad you loved it so much Jennifer! It feels great to receive kind appreciation from you with such beautiful words. Blessings and love :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:18 PM
POTD too Wow!
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thanks Andrea! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Aditi, this is a visual masterpiece. Wow, you SO deserved the win with this one! Had it been premier contest, for sure a trophy win. Congrats and a fave for me
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:37 AM
You are really kind with your encouraging words Andrea! Thank you for being a source of inspiration and for the fav. Much love :)
La France Avatar
July 16, 2020 at 4:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my bird contest with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation, the fav and my placement in your contest Constance. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 5:40 AM
Aditi, it was a joy to read! Congratulations on POTD!
Mishra Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Kim! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! A great story/poem and shape. Your pen does poems and now shapes. Where can I get one????? Enjoy your win and day..............
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 1:44 PM
I am blessed that you loved my muse Paula. Thank you for your kind words always drenched with love. Much love and blessings :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 8:03 AM
Love love love this! A fave <3
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Glad you love it Maureen. Thank you for the fave. Love :)
Krutsinger Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 4:09 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This blew me away! A terrific story and a marvelous SHAPE. I have tried these; they are spectacularly difficult I think. Wow! Great job my friend!
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 10:00 AM
Thank you for such kind appreciation dear Caren. Your blessings are a boon to me my friend. Much love :)
Nicole Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 6:29 PM
"A girl nursed her agony and made her feel loved" In times such as these, in a world filled with hate. LOVE is needed. Your presentation is beautiful. There is a wonderful message within. Thank you for that. Congratulations Aditi, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Glad you loved my muse Brandy! Thank you for visiting and appreciating my efforts. It means a lot to me. Blessings and love :)
Gentile Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Aditi, Congratulations on your POTD honors. I was so impressed by your poem. Excellent !!
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Glad you loved it Mike. Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings! :)
Kauffman Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 2:03 PM
A beautiful poem of healing and acceptance of one's gifts, Aditi. As Connie said, it is elegant. It is filled with the melody of life renewed and refreshed and given back. I also love the unique shape. Congratulations on POTD and your first place win. Much love and hugs...
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Thank you for visiting my page and showering your gracious appreciation Sam. Glad you loved my muse. Blessings and love :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Wow Aditi...I am beyond impressed with not only your bird shape but with the most elegant story you have shared! Your magnificent poem is so worthy of your first place win and POTD! My sincerest congratulations for both honors! I am saving this beauty to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:57 AM
I am glad you love my words Connie. Thank you for such wonderful appreciation and the fave. Much love and blessings my friend :)
Watt Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 11:04 AM
It did my heart a world of good to see this beautiful shape poem honored as POTD, Aditi! I'm happy for you, and acknowledge your talent and all the time you spent carefully crafting this little bird and her story. Enjoy the honor; I celebrate it with you. Congratulations, my friend! ~ John
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:57 AM
I am really happy to read your generous appreciation my friend. Thank you for sharing my honour. It is a blessing for me. You are a constant source of inspiration to me dear friend. God bless you :)
Roper Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Back With congratulations, very well deserved. Hugs Eve
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Thank you for coming back to congratulate me Eve. Much love :)
Mcgee Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 10:01 AM
This is such a wonderful and poetic piece AND you put it into an amazing shape...you are such a skilled poetess Aditi. Congrats on your first place AND your POTD with this great poem. :D
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:55 AM
I am so happy you love and appreciate my muse Jeanne. Thank you for your kind blessings and lovely encouragement my friend. Blessings and love to you :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 9:58 AM
A very beautiful, picturesque poem, Aditi! So much love shown in the midst of pain and despair. May love light your path in life always.
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:54 AM
I am glad you loved my muse Freddie. Thank you for visiting and for your gracious blessings. God bless you :)
Wanter Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 9:28 AM
This took a lot of work and a lot of talent! Congratulations!
Mishra Avatar
July 14, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Thank you for appreciating my efforts :) Blessings!
Romios Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations, Aditi. This is beyond phenomenal. Panagiota
Mishra Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Glad you loved it Panagiota. Thank you for your kind wishes :) Much love!
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