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CUATRO-SANDCASTLES

Sand quietly waits,
for children to come and play.
Mixing sand ~ water,
building sandcastles with no gates.

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Sara Kendrick

November 1, 2025 at 3:25 AM

What a delightful winning work. Descriptive, creative and on target. Way to go. Congratulations to you!! Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

November 1, 2025 at 12:35 PM

Thanks for your note and for coming back to read again. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" write to be, Descriptive, creative and on target. It was so much fun to write. Great to see you back. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2025 at 3:26 PM

So glad this made winner list. Congratulations, Paula

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 3:32 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "SANDCASTLES" write again. It was so much fun to write. Great see you back. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 1:26 PM

"3 Place" "SANDCASTLES" ~ Written:10/9/2025 ~Written By Human Poet.... ~~~ CREATE A CUATRO Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Terry Miller

October 15, 2025 at 8:37 AM

Back with congratulations Paula

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 1:25 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun "SANDCASTLES" write again. Always great to see you. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Sara Kendrick

October 11, 2025 at 1:48 PM

Ahh!! Sandcastles with no gates. Open at all times for everyone. Great way to go. Creative lines for sure. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 1:23 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. It was so much fun to write. No beach here. Yes, my Sandcastles have No gates. They are open at all times for play. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Andrea Dietrich

October 11, 2025 at 11:54 AM

Well done. The last line is so cool.

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 1:21 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "SANDCASTLES" to be, Well done. Also glad you found my last line to be, so cool. It was fun to write.. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Terry Miller

October 11, 2025 at 1:22 AM

Oh this is fun Paula, GL in the contest

Paula Goldsmith

October 11, 2025 at 11:18 AM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, GL in the contest. Glad you found my "SANDCASTLES" to be, fun. No beach here and I miss it. As a kid I loved the beach/water. Great Memories... Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Mystic Rose Rose

October 10, 2025 at 3:41 PM

that sure sounds like a wonderful pass time, building sandcastles without gates makes one feel most welcome Paula. You get a fav from me, can I bring my bucket and play in the sand too ?

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:51 PM

Thanks for your note. I see FAV??? Thanks a million. You made my day a happy one. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. It was so much fun to write. No beach here and I miss it. As a kid I loved the beach/water. Great Memories... Sure we can get a bucket and we can play in the sand together. Sounds like fun and be a kid again. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

David Crandall

October 10, 2025 at 2:21 PM

Fun!

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:46 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "SANDCASTLES" to be, Fun. It was fun to bring this to life. Great memories from playing on the beach as a kid. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Karen Jones

October 10, 2025 at 2:11 PM

Such fun to watch kids do this! Nice poem!

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:44 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" to be a, Nice poem. As a kid I loved going to the beach/water to play. Great Memories... Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 10, 2025 at 10:41 AM

- Lovely poem, Paula ... I built many sandcastles as a child :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:42 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" to be a, Lovely poem. No beach here and I miss it. As a kid I loved the beach/water. Great Memories... Hugs... Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Krishika Upadhyay

October 10, 2025 at 4:46 AM

I don't know why but I wanna visit back to my childhood to my little self and help her build that small castle,such a lovely poem

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:38 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" to be, a lovely poem. Yes, we need to her build it. It is sad to see the water wash them away. Tomorrow is a new day for SANDCASTLES. Hooray!!! We can build another one. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

William Kelii Kekaula

October 9, 2025 at 11:28 PM

As a kid whose time is spent a lot at the beach, I’ve the patience to build them, and ... the willpower to send them back to just being sand. That usually happens when the encroaching waves have their own way, to the point that I must raise the white flag. Way to go with your writing exposé at the branch. Blessings to you, Aloha.

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:35 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. It was so much fun to write. No beach here and I miss it. As a kid I loved the beach/water. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 9, 2025 at 10:17 PM

The truth of life now a days, childhood lost indoors.... best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:33 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, best wishes for the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. Kids miss out by living inside. We had a ton of fun outside playing. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

sara Etgen-Baker

October 9, 2025 at 6:28 PM

nicely done, Paula. Best wishes with this contest entry...have a blessed autumn evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:30 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Best wishes with this contest entry. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" to be, nicely done. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Hilda Greenhough

October 9, 2025 at 12:17 PM

I hate to see the water wash them away. This is a fun poem.

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:28 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "SANDCASTLES" to be, a fun poem. Yes, it is sad to see the water wash them away. Tomorrow is a new day for SANDCASTLES. Hooray!!! Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

I Am Anaya

October 9, 2025 at 11:55 AM

I loved the sands perspective, it unfolded nicely! Wishing good luck on the contest :)

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:24 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Wishing good luck on the contest. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. It was a ton of fun to write. I wish there was a beach here. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Kevin Leake

October 9, 2025 at 10:07 AM

Enjoyed your quatrain Paula building sand castles in the sand lovely Best wishes Kevin

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 3:20 PM

Thanks for your note. Also thanks for your, Best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun "SANDCASTLES" write. It was so much fun to write. No beach here. Daydream of building SANDCASTLES as you write away..........

Paula Goldsmith

October 9, 2025 at 8:24 AM

"SANDCASTLES" ~ Written:10/9/2025 ~Written By Human Poet.... ~~~ CREATE A CUATRO Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

CUATRO-SANDCASTLES

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