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10.10.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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CREATE A CUATRO Poetry Contest
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5th place in the contest

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- Cuatro Sandcastle -


      For personal gain
      He builds a sandcastle on lies
      The road to chaos
      Sun-heated sand cause burning pain

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Sara Kendrick

November 1, 2025 at 3:36 AM

What a delightful winning work. Descriptive, creative and on target. So many live their lives on lies and at some point, those lies will always catch up with a person. Way to go. Congratulations to you!! Sara K

Reason A. Poteet

October 16, 2025 at 5:17 PM

Congratulations, Anne-Lise. Just talking with a friend this week about the popularity of lying - almost like it's the in-thing to do anymore. I like your theme.

Andrea Dietrich

October 15, 2025 at 3:30 PM

A deep one! Congratulations on the win

Paula Goldsmith

October 15, 2025 at 1:44 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "SANDCASTLES" write again. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win...................

Terry Miller

October 15, 2025 at 8:47 AM

Actions rooted in deception and self-interest are unsustainable, great, brief poem, congratulations

Dr. Vandana Sharma

October 12, 2025 at 12:55 AM

The bitter truth o fthe world. All the best for the contest.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2025 at 1:21 PM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Vandana :) - hugs

sara Etgen-Baker

October 10, 2025 at 5:57 PM

well done! Sincerely, the brevity of your poem is perfect...adds meaning to your words. best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sar a

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2025 at 1:20 PM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

October 10, 2025 at 1:03 PM

Whoa!! I can imagine that castle would heat up to burning. Those air castle will burn as well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2025 at 1:20 PM

- Sara, thank you very much for your comment :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

October 10, 2025 at 12:57 PM

Your "Sandcastle" is a creative write. Love your fun picture. Good Luck" We both did "Sandcastle." Hugs... (I just sent you Soup Mail.) Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 12, 2025 at 1:20 PM

- Thank you very much for your comment, Paula :) - hugs