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Crystals of Healing - TB

Crystal rose shines amidst wine fog~ nine star-seeds traced.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2023 8:04:00 AM

I like this one. These are no so easy to write. LOL..You have done it very nicely though. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/27/2023 3:53:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win, Hiya! Truly beautiful. Inspiring to think we may be guided by "star-seeds" with the wisdom of the ages - maybe they are angels who walk with us. Blessings to you!

Silent One

Date: 11/22/2023 10:50:00 AM

Even with a short form like this your use of vocabulary is of a high standard... lovely imagery in only a few words..

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/17/2023 8:36:00 PM

Congratulations!

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 2:44:00 PM

Fantastic, Hiya. A boxing challenge of a poetic form, and notably aced it with a championship win, with your knockout words that flatten an audience towards fan-filled imaginations. Cheers on your win, my friend. Aloha, William

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 4:45:00 AM

So beautiful, Hiya. Lovely imagery too! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/12/2023 10:33:00 AM

Hiya, your simple lines shine with a beauty from within your "crystal lilies." There is an elegant simplicity in the articulation of your imagery - "wine fog," and "crystal lilies." You have an amazing ability to make words dance for you creating visions into profound poetic depth! Best wishes for the contest! Crystal blessings of joy to you!

Joe Dimino

Date: 11/10/2023 3:33:00 PM

Nicely done, Hiya; love the ring of crystal as well. Class.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/10/2023 12:36:00 PM

Great originality to compose such a charming poem. Blessings.

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/9/2023 10:51:00 PM

Such a beautiful Than - Bauk dear Hiya from your golden pen and a new form to me. Love the title and as always, your artistically crafted words are deep, reflective and awe inspiring. Keep shining dear one. Really enjoyed reading and pondering upon this read. Love and hugs to you xxx

Bill Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 6:06:00 PM

Hard form, but nice imagery for such a short poem, Hiya. Thanks for sharing your poetic gift with us, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/9/2023 2:46:00 PM

the title of your Than-Bauk grabbed my attention, Hiya. You have a remarkable talent seen through such a few short lines. I loved 'wine fog'-eloquent and beautiful. You're a true poetic artist! Have a great evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 6:55:00 AM

Dear Hiya, your poem is truly stunning. The way you have crafted your words and utilized rhymes is exceptionally articulate. Your imagination and ability to paint vivid Imagery with your well-picked diction is truly remarkable. BOL with the contest

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/9/2023 5:44:00 AM

Crystal lilies shine amidst wine fog--splendid imagination and word painting!

Ink Empress

Date: 11/9/2023 4:06:00 AM

Ah crystals of healing that title gives an idea of what you’ve shown through your beautiful word weaving! Absolutely gorgeous this is, and so well articulated with profound rhymes! I really love “ crystal lilies shine” ah made me see them. There was a time i was into crystals, something about the beauty of them truly is soul warming! I love “ wine fog” “ nine star seeds traced “ wow keep healing angelic star! I just love everything about this and depth of what you’ve expressed! Fave for me

Hiya Sharma
Date: 11/16/2023 6:41:00 AM

Indeed, crystals and cosmic elements truly are very interesting to me! And yes, they are your favorite as well :) Thank you so much my dear Fairy, Goddess, Ink, you're the bestest! I'm beyond grateful for everything, your ethereal presence in my life fills me with so much positivity.. Your heart is golden!