Crystal River

Crystal River


There is a crystal river flowing somewhere
somewhere it is flowing in my dreams.
When in my dreams I have a chance to wander
I wander to this gentle flowing stream.

As the sunlight dances happily upon it
quietly I sit and watch it play.
Time stands still within this golden moment
and I can feel my anguish slip away.

There grows a tree that weeps upon the water
where birds are singing sweetly from her veil
and as the sun weaves diamonds through her tresses
with tears of joy she weeps a radiant trail.

With abandon, her love flows to join the river
that is waiting, as a lover, for her kiss.
The beauty of their joining is resplendent
and I prosper from the glory of their bliss.

Nighttime never falls upon this river
which is forever flowing in my mind
yet in the days when I am filled with darkness
to all this shining beauty I am blind.

In those times I need a golden beacon
to light my soul and help me find my way
to the path that leads me to my precious river
where all my sorrow can be washed away.

There is a crystal river flowing somewhere
I hear it calling softly from my dreams
tempting me to come and sit forever
beside this bright and gentle flowing stream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Strand Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 2:44 AM
Lovely kyrielle flavours gere Robin.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Fraser Avatar
September 19, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Lovely poem Robin, a joy to read>>James
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February 13, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Congrats on being featured!!!!!
Guzzi Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Hon, this is a richer expression of your previuos thought in If I could capture Sunshine and where the first was good this is excellent. Wath out for the dreaded "that" I actually thing in one case you mean which. xxoo
Mckenzie Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 1:10 PM
Robin such a vision of beauty you created with your imagery in this wonderful poem! Congratulations on your featured poem of the week! Thank you for you on going support! Laura :)
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 4:34 AM
Robin this poem is so peaceful and beautiful - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2009 at 4:56 PM
A beautiful poem to be featured ...wonderful writing Robin...this is so lovely! ~love, Carrie
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February 10, 2009 at 4:03 PM
congrats on this beautiful poem being featured this week!...*Maryam*
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February 10, 2009 at 1:55 PM
A touch of serenity. Congratulationjs on "Crystal River" being featured this week. Vince
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February 9, 2009 at 12:40 AM
And i will join you my friend... you have managed to capture me right there with your poem... ~ Arany
Strand Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 12:27 AM
Congrats on your feature this week Robin.Rgds Brian
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February 8, 2009 at 5:34 PM
Hi Robin, this poem has a real grace and beauty. I found it very tranquil and inspirational, with such lovely imagery. Congrats on being featured this week, it was well deserved! :) Love, Amy
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February 8, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Robin, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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December 11, 2008 at 2:37 AM
I have done it, the long task of catching up with all of your poems. I feel honored, God bless...Raul
Fawcett Avatar
November 27, 2008 at 11:47 PM
While reading this, I am transported to the scene that you describe while, simultaneously, my emotions share the feelings represented by your words. This is a beautifully piece of lachrymose writing. BTW, I enjoyed your original interpretation of Midnight Feast, which shone a whole new light on it for me. Love, Nigel
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November 25, 2008 at 1:04 PM
Creative use of imagery and personification in this poem. Your words feel so peaceful. Nice job! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen
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November 14, 2008 at 8:07 PM
Fine rhyming, flow and imagery... your phrasing is sublime '...sun weaves diamonds,' '...prosper from the glory,' and many more. Well constructed and expressed! Best wishes, Keith
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