Crystal Night

BIRD, ALONE, FREEZING NIGHT. FLY INTO MY HOME AND STAY. SUNRISE, FLY AWAY. 1/14/2021 ~1~

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/15/2021 11:43:00 AM

Your kindness shows vividly in these lines, Pangie. Welcoming someone in need to the warmth of your home is such touching charitable act. ~ Best regards // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/14/2021 8:29:00 PM

Great! And, you know, there's more than one way to read your third line! Alternatively, it could be read as if it said: 'Fly away, sunrise!' (I.e., I want to spend the night with my bird... Absurd?! -- Perhaps... But I think not). ~ Just sayin,' gw

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/15/2021 11:06:00 AM

Good point, Gershon...I didn't notice that... Thanks, Pangie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 5:47:00 AM

Refuge from winters chill in the comfort of your home. Tom

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/14/2021 8:16:00 AM

OMG..all my replies to you are missing. I think a bird would love it I here. So would Irene))) Pangie